Brian Boru's Spirit

[gRaViJa]

After just some testing in noteworthy, this is my first real song. At first i just wanted to write the notes for Brian Boru's March down. But in the end, when i tried to make more of a whole song of it, it was quiet different then the march, so i called it brain boru's spirit it's not really loopable, but i tried to make it so that it doesnt sound terrible, and guess what, it doesnt

Q&Q very welcome, as i can use it

i you want to use it, plz give credit.

EDIT: http://media.putfile.com/Borus-Spirit

 

[gRaViJa]

*bump, i really would like some help/critique on this

 

[gRaViJa]

gonna bump this one last time... :'(

 

[Kingwalrus]

Well I don't know much about music or making it, but I think this song was nice, if somewhat too short.

 

[Roman Candle]

I couldn't get it to play :p

 

[Arcanum]

I'd have to say the same as Roman Candle... I don't know much about .au files at all, except that my computer doesn't recognize them. I'd love to critique... but maybe you should try using a host like putfile or freewebtown to host it instead.

 

[l3lind3d]

Yeah... I couldn't listen to it as well.

 

[gRaViJa]

Oh, k, didnt know that. ill use putfile instead. its just weird, because i uploaded it as .mid file

i also got to say my next bgm is sounding much better then this one, ill post that one soon to

 

[pzanno]

I was able to listen to this song...
Pretty good for just starting out with Noteworth Composer. I would suggest adding some more instruments to this song. Although, i don't know what mood you are going for here or what theme this song is supposed to fit. However, to give this song more of a "complete" feeling i would try an incorporate more instruments into this piece. So far i like the strings and the harp, I like the piano at first but then it went away after the first measure. I would try and bring the piano back.

Anyway, if you let me know what this song is for exactly, i could critique it in a more effective manner. Overall, i think you're doing good here, you got a nice melody, so keep it coming.

 

[gRaViJa]

thx, for the critique. i will try to make this one better after i finished another bgm. I didnt made this song for a specific mood at first, but during i was making it, i was trying to give it a melancholic mood. anyways, ill try to add the piano in it