Art Thread of Doom!

[StrawberrySmiles]

Or it could be the angle. XD

I either have too small of heads or too big, lols.

 

[Spoo]

I wouldn't listen to me regarding art; I'm all but inept in that category.

 

[Daxis]

A new OC: Faey Mistsong.

Angle makes it a tad hard to really grasp.

That said, right hand needs some work or something. Thumb looks offish and small (possibly angle issues), while the pinky is kinda... bent? (Mines is bent a bit as well, but not this noticeably)

The shadowy parts of the sleeves look rather stiff/2d compared to the rest. Noticed this after noting how well done the left hand/arm was in relation to her body, but then the shadows beneath sorta took away from that,.

Is the breast(s) too low?

Nice legs. Very much so, but thighs area seem a bit elongated (while this could be blamed on the angle, I';m gonna just say they look excessive). Possibly due to hip placement. Maybe it's right anatomically or whatever, but right now I feel as if it's eh.

Elf ears should be moved up a tad?

Are the sleeves attached to the shirt/dress/whatever somehow?

tits.

 

[Daxis]

Just a quick sketch I did. ^_^

I like how the breasts look- particularly their shapeliness and the use of shadow beneath to emphasize a 3D feel to it. (that and they're large and are able to cast considerable shadow. Maybe it's the slightly harder shading on the curve of her left breast)

hands, hands are so pointy. That said, the fingers need to be adjusted for length, particualrly the ring and pinky.

Her right arm feels as if the arm is eh, not really there. Als, the farther you go down her right arm, the more 2 dimensional it looks.

Some of the sleeve creases on her left sleeve looks weird.
AndI just realized the pointy things happening right next to her breasts or whateve r and it's like what is this, not a big deal I gues but what's up?
Face is rather round. I recommend moving up the ears a bit. Making the face a bit more 3d would really help here.

The cloth... scarf? Thing around her neck/collarbone/shoulders/etc. could probably use some defining. Its creases are rather straight and bland at the moment, and could use some work.

 

[Daxis]

Simple shading strikes again!

Moar Pixel Art!

Ears. Up.

This is a great chance to learn more wings-on-back design. I think there were better ways to do simple shading. I'm not practiced in it myslef, but I'd just hazard sharper stuff for the wings, but idk.
Fingers, fingers, keep conscious of length and portrayal. The left hand looks like the ring finger is *absurdly* long. Her right thumb is mildly undefined as well.

The right pinky finger poking out is.... hmm. Wondering if it's placed right.
Right middle finger, keep conscious of where that is as well, in the lattice of fingers, and how it's portrayed.
Uh


It's actually really cool other than that.

 

[Daxis]

btw you've gotten like awesome improvement, so keep the shazz up.
It's 3 AM and I have class in 6 hours and I don't want to sleep.

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

Thanks for all the advice, Daxy! :D

I'm trying to keep at it. :3

Pixel art I made last night.

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

Just some concept doodles for an OC named Mirwen.

 

[Nachos]

holy moly i love those drawing. and the pixelart!

Keep up the good work!

Have you tried to manually shade those drawings?

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

Thanks a bunches!

I have not. ._.

I want to use color pencil, but I dunno what to do.

 

[Nachos]

i mean, the computer drawed stuff, not the pixel art, the big ones.

zoom and pixel shading?

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

Oh, I drew those with a pencil and scanned them on the computer. XD

I can draw on the computer. Or color. D=

 

[Nachos]

Oh fuck thats a great idea. im getting a drawing pad thingie next month though,.

how did yo umanage to color them so neatly? vectorazing it?

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

Hmmm... I used layers! I'll have to remember all the steps. D=

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

Randomly drawn picture of my OC Mirwen, a Punipun Bard. :D

 

[Nachos]

them bewbs.
the body is awesome but something i weird about the face

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

The face is too squashed together, me thinks. .___.

 

[Nachos]

YEAH KINDA, NEED VOLUME

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

A quick doodle of Aelina from Ghost Shards!

 

[StrawberrySmiles]

It's been awhile, but who cares? XD

I can't color my own artwork - I did not paint this or anything, so yeah. D= A concept for the main character of my side game/story! Colors can change at any time!

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