Kudos to your concept, and the art work is fruitful. Definitely a sight that keeps me interested.
I'd say the only thing that'd turn me away is the way your word and write your paragraphs/sentences. Bad grammar, punctuation, sentence strucutre, spelling, and etc. can really turn some one off.
You're obviously bilingual, but English not being your first language. Perhaps give your English written version to some one who speaks it more fluently, that way it can be written properly, making it more pleasant for the user.
That aside, yay for ideas, decent character development, wonderful artwork, and an original story.