A work in progress character

[Colormagix]

Okay this is a work in progres character but im showing for some well comments and ideas, any comments at all are welcome, as long as they are relevant


http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f312/ ... tachar.png[/IMG]

UPDATE
I changed it a bit hope this looks better comments?
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f312/ ... achar2.png[/IMG]

 

[Nakama]

The hair seems to look a little strange, it doesn't seem to blend that well at the top, also the arms seem unshaded, otherwise it looks pretty good.

 

[Anonymous]

I don't think I have seen this style of template before (if your even using a template)

But I like it. The colour use is ok; maybe try adjusting your colour palate a little bit to make it feel like more of a theme and less of a random mash of clothes.

It's almost like an anime style. It's good. Keep up the good work. :D

 

[LegACy]

woot!
I like it!!
What's the template? I've never seen it...
Nice pallete, if you're trying to achieve anime look, you've done a great job. The only prob is in the hair the most left (his right) hair is kinda strange...

 

[Colormagix]

there is not template well the template only has one frame.... this is my newest template character. all completely done by me. thanks for the comments guys it makes me happy that you all like my work

 

[NexS]

i would have to say that there is shading, but it's very plain...
heres a few pointers
*the hairline and the top of his hair are different... umm, like his fringe doesn't seem to curve out the same as the part in his hair(but this is minor)
*you've only used one colour for shading; the more, the merrier :D
*you should also use highlights, not only shading
*the colour that you've used to outline the red shirt and pants are far too dark in comparison to the 'inside' colour that the other areas or the image, lighten them up a little bit. This will also help to un-hide the shoes under all that colour :D

great start though you're becoming better and better each time

 

[Colormagix]

I updated and added the walking animation

 

[Lashiec]

It's kind of creepy that only the head bobs up and down on the walk animation. Usually the entire sprite shifts down one pixel and the shorts get shortened one pixel since the bottom of the boot stays in the same spot. Or, at least that's how RTP style is. Also, the feet seem to be cut off on the walking animation.

 

[Skyline]

@LegACy: I'm almost sure it's his own template