Zerosuit Samus Half-Kaizer alike char

[Redd Floxy]

Since the Smash Bros RPG project turned out to be a failure I started to think of something else, not gonna tell what's it gonna be but I guess you can already know the main idea when looking at this sprite.

But now I ask of you, what can I still change to make this sprite closer to beign beautiful?
http://i33.tinypic.com/r8z0wl.png[/imgzoom]


As you can propably see I used the Half-Kaizer template as a base, but I edited the body a bit and made the face from scratch.

Thanks in advance!

 

[coyotecraft]

The hair is really hurting you. I think you should define more of the bangs for add more hair lines. It's pillowshaded at the top tsk tsk tsk.

For beauty tips you could start by giving her eyelashes and maybe eyebrows. I don't think the red lips are necessary.
And since you're straying from the HK template you could probably give her more neck and longer legs.
Fabulous *gay wist flick* <3
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r134 ... makeup.png[/IMGzoom]

With the outlines you usually use a darker color on bottom or were there's shadow and use a lighter color on top.
and add the zoom tag for pixel works so people can see it better. Just add zoom after

 

[Redd Floxy]

I see what you mean with the hair, but the problem is, the hair you drew ain't Samus's hair...

I'll work on the neck and legs, thanks!


EDIT: Changed the hair =>

http://i33.tinypic.com/1smuyx.png[/IMGzoom]

 

[WeaponOD]

She looks as if she's slouching forward, with her head down, looking down. Your could fix that by shading a bit differently on the face.

 

[Showkaizer]

I agree with Weapon. What you need to do is free up her neckline a bit. Perhaps move the hair to the side some . Heres the best example I could find:

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/4485/samexxi5.png[/imgzoom]

 

[Redd Floxy]

I changed a bit here and there according to the feedbacks.

http://i35.tinypic.com/28ch5kk.png[/imgzoom]

The left one is the older version and the right one is the newer version.

 

[Showkaizer]

MUCH better.

 

[WeaponOD]

You added some neck xD, good job!

 

[Colormagix]

You added some neck xD, good job!

Lol that deserves, best line of the week award.

On topic: You still need to work on the hair, but the body looks great.