X's Workshop

[Xcelled]

I'm a working man xD. I will post the full sprite sheets after getting some C+C from you pros that reside in this forum, but really i'm excepting C+C from everybody and will take it with much appreciation.
Making many monster battlers for the project free to use and of course any C+C is appreciated. My game has some sci-fi kinda so you'll see a lot of weird concept stuff lol.

Spoiler: Battlers

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc316/XLODXcelled/Sorceress.png[/img]http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc316/XLODXcelled/Dragoon.png[/img]http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc316/XLODXcelled/FlameDragoon.png[/img]http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc316/XLODXcelled/Sweeper.png[/img]http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc316/XLODXcelled/Slimy-1.png[/img]http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc316/XLODXcelled/Cybot.png[/img]

Spoiler: Charsets

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc316/XLODXcelled/SaigonSpritecopy.png[/img]

Spoiler: Facesets

http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc316/XLODXcelled/SaphraFace3.png[/img]http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc316/XLODXcelled/HitomiFace4copy.png[/img]

Template I used was HalfKaizer for charsets created originaly by Shadow Kaizer with secondary creators Tana and Cerulean Skye with recolors by Raven, thank you.

 

[BunnyKinx]

is that going to be a animated battler... if so i cannot see anything wrong with it. however....

if its a still image it could do with being a little bigger. also the perspective on the blades look a little off. the front foot needs totally redoing. and the eyes need raising a few pixels

but really well done :D

 

[Ratty524]

is that going to be a animated battler... if so i cannot see anything wrong with it. however....

if its a still image it could do with being a little bigger. also the perspective on the blades look a little off. the front foot needs totally redoing. and the eyes need raising a few pixels

but really well done :D

Considering the size of the "still image" RTP battlers, the size is perfectly fine for a human-type character.

Eh, other than that I can't really add to what Xcuma pointed out, it's not that bad, though.

 

[cactus]

omg I love that. If i didn't do my own artwork i would totally use this. I love that style!

 

[Luminier]

It reminds me of RPG World! Anyone remember that... Anyone?

Gah, anyways, I like it. The weapons look a little off, though. Did you shade them?

 

[Xcelled]

Your right about the weapons and the foot too thanks for your comments, again does anyone know how to make toughs spoiler tabs I need to organize my workshop xD.

 

[Impreza]

spoiler tabs, here:-

[spoiler]put what to be in your spoiler tab.[/spoiler]

 

[sixtyandaquarter]

Impreza you could use [noparse][noparse][/noparse][/noparse] tags which will not parse any tags inside.
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@Xcelled,
What everyone else said +
The right handed petal blade thing does look like it's indented out, but the shading doesn't match. The light source on each petal looks like it's coming from that petals direction.
The top petal has light coming from the top. The left looks like it's coming from the left. The right, well you get the idea.
While it's common practice for people to do that, it makes things look cheap and amateurish.

It's better than I could've attempt, but like I said the light sourcing is contradictory. Else where too, not just the blade.
Not bad though, thus far.

 

[Impreza]

@sixty&1/4: Woot! never know that kind of trick.

xcelled, I think it looks...erm...great.

 

[Xcelled]

Made a matching charset c+c would be appreciated since it's only my second sprite iv'e ever made.

 

[Samboy]

Well, there is a lot of saturation on the sprite, which is good. However, the whole sprite needs saturation, namely the shirt and face (not the eyes or hair, they look fine).

I must say the hair looks a little blocky, but apart from that, I think it's a decent sprite.

 

[Xcelled]

This any better?
View attachment 3099
Thanks for advice btw^^.

 

[sixtyandaquarter]

The strap going across the chest looks a little funky, the way it suddenly stops it's straight and diagonal route to suddenly dip straight down.
Maybe it's some weird article of clothing that is connected to the rest so as to bend like that.

Or maybe it's a free strap that just starts at the belt and works its way over the shoulder, in which case I'd add a bit less curve, or make the curve softer by raising it higher up, making the diagonal route from the shoulder pad less drastic on way down.
I have no clue if that made sense

That and what sam said.
The hair still looks a little blocky but your new shading works better - maybe a little over kill (pain in the ass aren't I?), but better. Personally I don't think you need that darkest shade in the shadow from the hair, I think you can lose that to the 2nd darkest color.

 

[Xcelled]

New charaset up model after my character vix and thanks alot for you advice I suck at hair.

 

[Xcelled]

Added a Dragoon Demon type monster funny story actually it began as practice on exaggerated muscle bulk and turned into that. Free to use ofcourse.

 

[Samboy]

A fair few of these are screwing up, you'd better re-upload them.