WIP Tykes (PA)

[Granas3 REMIXED]

These are a few Tykes i've made. I've only realy got what you see here, so decided against putting them onto acatual characters just yet. They are all from final fantasy games, except for four. The ones with ticks beneath them are finished.
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n133 ... /WIP-1.png[/img]
Please post constructive criticsim, I am new to freehand spriting.
I've only done the front frame of each here, but if you want the full sprites, PM me, and i'll see what I can do.

 

[Halestorm5]

They look nice, but Id suggest you get a reference for them.

 

[Granas3 REMIXED]

Why? I do know what they look like, and i think they're pretty close(with the exception of axel, it wasn't sprited as Axel, just the guy in my avatar, so i guess he might be a little off). Could you maybe be more specific?

 

[Kisa Yukaki]

You might know who they are... but there are people who don't. ^^;

In my opinion, Kefka and Cloud's hair are too bright, and Axel's hair is a little strange (I don't know why, but it is a little strange).

Other than that, they're all nice! ^^ I really like Aerith and Vincent!

 

[Halestorm5]

Actually, now that I look again, they are actually good.

But Axels hair, Tifa's body and Clouds hair looks wrong to me.

 

[Chiyo Osaka]

I hate to nitpick, but Cloud's hair is spiked the wrong way, Tifa is missing her suspenders, and the back of Sephiroth's hair looks like it's not there. I also suggest making Axel's hair more spiky and less poofy.

Other than that, not bad at all. I can't complain about the shading, either.

 

[Kururu]

Aww! That Cefca is awesome and cute!
Please finish him!

 

[Kelg]

These are really good, I know it's not easy to make freehand sprites. Keep up the good work ^_^

 

[Granas3 REMIXED]

Updated Axel's hair and added Squall LEonhart from FF8.

 

[Loofah]

Granas you seem to have a lot of WIP's with trench coats, may I suggest using my trenchcoats for tykes that I made for ~emo~ but he never used.

Heres the link to the tyke thread post that I put them on:

http://www.rmxp.org/forums/showthread.php?t=20323&highlight=Tyke&page=49

oh yeah andf I almost forgot I can't seem to find squall on that picture.

 

[Granas3 REMIXED]

Those are nice coats, but I prefer to do free-hand spriting with tykes rather than frankensprites. Also, two isn't exactly lots.
Squall is right at the end, I said that the list named the sprites from left to right.
I have now got my first sprite finished-Kefka Pallazzo.
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n133 ... /cefca.png[/IMG]

 

[Granas3 REMIXED]

Update. I've been hard at work, and now have added a tone of mainly FF related sprites. Please note that a few, particularly in the ones from  FF1, are based more on my interpretation of them. The four fiends, for example, look nothing like their battlers, with the possible exception of Marilith.

 

[FlippyD]

Really cute ^_^

I'd add some desaturated and complementary colors to make them pop out more and not be so bright though.

Also, Vincent's cape shouldn't spread out so much at that angle at his waist, The cape would start spreading out at his shoulders.
Aeris' hairline is too high, lower it by 2-3 pixels and check how it looks.
Whoever that girl is with the red hair and two swords she's really cool and just about perfect.
The outline of Cele's hair is too dark and not consistent with your other outlines, though it' a step in the right direction (some of the other outlines are far too bright.)

 

[WalkingAbomination]

Cool, don't remember seeing this thread before, anyway i really like the Kefka character, only thing you should do is add some more contrast to his hair, the lines going thru the head should be darker imo.