WIP - Phoenix Characters

[Whitewolf]

Well since the other topic got deleted because of the backup. I'll just post here for criticism. Well some of you may remember my game Phoenix (Might change the name) with the RTP sprites. Well after a long pause I've decided to create the game again but this time with White Ties style sprites. So far 2 are in the works with another 2 main characters to be completed. Also means that if I can..get all NPC's to be original etc. It'll be fun but hard at the same time. Anyway, preview of two of the sprites.


11/12/06 - Akai Complete
Update - 3rd WIP Added

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k257/ ... eview1.png[/IMG]

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k257/ ... review.png[/IMG]

Any advice or suggestions?

~Whitewolf~

 

[|3_32]

I like Shizuka better then the other two .. did you sprite them all yourself? Cos it seems to take a leap in skill to go from Akai and Aurelio, who both seem rather simple, to Shizuka, who's got more details.

The first two need contrast and maybe the colours toned down a little, they're very bright compared to the third. Good works, even if a little simple in the design dept. on the first two.

 

[Whitewolf]

Well with me spriting them by myself is really a yes and no. The original characters were in RTP format so I've really just taken the palletes from the characters and applied them to the templates. The two male characters were created on the template found on these forums and Shizuka was created on a template for females I'm attempting to do. If I can I'll try and add more detail to the first two and sort the contrast out.

~Whitewolf~

 

[kidd6686]

I love the girl sprite the other two seems too blah lol but she rocks~! very original and originality catches the eye of a true artist~!

 

[Whitewolf]

Well I've updated Akai a bit well. Actually re-did the whole sprite after finding errors everywhere (Akai is complete now). I've toned down the colours but still not sure about the contrast. Details..well I'm still trying to sort that out. Next is too finish Aurelio and Shizuka before I start the final character, Kasumi.

Anyway. heres new image which will also be in the first post too.

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