WIP original concept

[Angelman]

Hey everybody,
I've been with .org for a while now, but i never really did any posting until now (yay first post!) Anyway, i'm working on a character, and i was wondering if i should continue. I used GR's template (I hope he doesn't mind :please.
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t1/A ... 1173034259[/IMG]

Any advice would be helpful, thanks guys & gals :2thumbsup02:

 

[Jason]

It's a little hard to judge from what I can see, but I think it looks good, I think you should carry on making this, In my opinion, the hair could do with a little more toning. But it looks nice from what I can see, 7/10

 

[sixtyandaquarter]

I think the lightest color in the hair doesn't match the rest, seems to stand out like a shock of dyed hair, and looks flattish. Try shading in the center as well, so theres not a lighter blob.

Attire doesn't look bad in the one fram it's there heh.

 

[DFortun81]

It looks fine to me. Keep working on this.

 

[Angelman]

Alright thanks for your opinion, guys!