WIP-HK Treasure Hunter

[magelethal]

Hi everybody,
here´s my new wip half kaizer character which i´ll put in my game:lol: .Is a treasure hunter(kinda':| ):

plz feedback!
:D


Edit:I put the fixed chara on the side of the old one for you compare.Plz, say which do you prefere.
Edit2:Eyes fixed.

 

[Afro Samurai]

I don't see anything.

EDIT: Now I see. It's a nice start. Finish it.

 

[Onsokamaru]

It's not bad at all.
It's pretty good.
The things i didn't like were the belt that looks too straight, and does not combine with the curve in his body. And the back of the hair, that looks more like a wig than his real hair. oh, and the hair over his eye looks weird too. It should start at the same level as the rest of the hair, but it looks like it start from behind (Like he has longer hair in the middle of the head than in his forehead)
Thats it. Pretty good.

 

[ryanwh]

Im glad people are using the chubby HK template.
The front of the hair is a little weird, I thought it was a hat at first.

 

[magelethal]

Thanks onsokamaru.I´ll try to fix it.
I must thank Tana for her great and helpful hair tutorial.

 

[RavenTDA]

Hair looks better on the first one,clothes better on the second. With the second one the hair covers the eyes too strange. For one thing if he wore is hair like that he'd be blind since it covers it almost compleatly! :P I'm not sure if you are going for a slicked back look or more of bangs falling in his eyes. If you are trying to do slicked back then the hair line needs to be much higher. If the bangs then you need to define the strands from the rest of the hair. The part is very strange as well going horizontal instead of vertical. The back of the hair is too straight across. Try rounding it off more. The longest point should be in the center while going shorter on the sides if it's all one length. The shading on the back is done very nicely however. I'm also enjoying the ripped shirt effect. :D Anyways you're doing good so far just gotta sort some things out.

 

[Harlock]

Really good work, but why treasure hunter?

B-)

 

[magelethal]

Really good work, but why treasure hunter?

B-)

I don´t know....I was thinking an archeologist or egyptlogist:-/ .Like I said the chara looks kinda like a treasure hunter':| .

 

[lunarea]

He looks kinda like a plumber to me :lol:

I like the sprite on the right better, except for the eyes. They look kinda scary.

 

[Artia]

I like second... the first has a bad belt...

 

[Harlock]

It's in two different moment of game, first cleaned, second after work, not?

B)

 

[magelethal]

Okay.
Here´s another update of my chara.The sideview is without hair cuz I don´t how to make it in sideview':| .I was wondering if someone couldhelp me.
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/1540 ... atepl7.png[/IMG]

Bye:D

 

[magelethal]

I´m back.The front view is done
Here it is:
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2918/npc4updatemq4.png[/IMG]

I still don´t know how to make th sideview hair.......plz S.O.S someone help me:lol: .

 

[RavenTDA]

Hmm you'll need to be watching your sleeves. On the bottom of the sleeves you simply outlined it with one color. You should try shading it and it'll look much less liney and more 3D. As for the hair on the side-view. It's basically the same thing, just shape the hair differntly. I can't really help you since I'm not sure what you are trying to go for. But as it stands your hair looks extreamly stiff especially after you added in the animation of it. Again you never answered me if this hair is supposed to be slicked. Right now with the animation it's got a very gel texture. The front view on the hair still looks strange too me. It looks more like a helmet than anything. It's too all one piece... know what I mean?

 

[magelethal]

Thanks Raven,I´ll fix th sleeves.And the hair is supposed tobe slicked.
Bye