[WIP] Dreams

[Chaos_Prime]

-=NOTE=-
This is a one hero game so no extra heroes are available.

-=Story=-
Dreamweavers, said to be the ones that influence our dreams, our lives, and our hopes. Within a year of happy weaving an unexpected event happened, the Ward of Nightmares suddenly was riped open releasing all the Nightmares that were trapped therein, to once again roam Dream World. Now a hero from the Human World must be called forth to save both Dream World and the Human World. A ritual of the upmost taboo was conducted to bring a human, a dreamer, into Dream World to save the Dreamweavers from the rising Nightmare threat.

-=Characters=-
Aluxes - A hero from our world, the world of humans, was brought into Dream World to save all the Dreamweavers from the increasing Nightmare threat.

Mimira - A Dreamweaver who, helps from time to time to aid Aluxes in his mission.

Mika - Mimira's baby, what power could this child hold? And why are the Nightmares after her?

Cody - A Dreamsmith in Vanguard City that aids Alxuses.

Godiva - A mysterious man who gives Aluxes hints on his next destination.(appears randomly)

Dravis - Lord of all the Nightmares within Dream World, after being released by an unknown weaver, Dravis beings his new plot to rule all of Dream World.

-=Races=-
Humans - The dreamers and the basis of the Dream World's work, threatened by the Nightmares a human from our world is brought
into Dream World to save all dreams and both Dream World and our world.

Dreamweavers - Weavers of dreams, hope, life, and all other emotions that a human has.

Nightmares - Monstrosities created by an evil group of Weavers bent on causing havoc throughout Dream World, and ours.

-=Scripts=-
SDK - Trickster
1 Hero CMS - Caldaron
1 Hero CBS - Raz
Locker Script - Can't remember(please refresh it)
Keyboard Input Module - Cybersam
Item Inventory - SephirothSpawn
Path Finding - Near Fantastica
Inn & Savepoint System V1 - SephirothSpawn
Splash Script - lambchop
Element Affinity - Fomar0153

-=Percentage=-
Story(main) - 50%
Story(dialog) - 10%
Tile Set - 5%(using Mack sets)
Characters - 5%
Monsters - 5%
Weapons - 5%
Armor - 5%
Items - 5%
Music - 0%(only using RTP)
SFX - 0%(same as music)

-=Demo=-
None yet still in works.

-=Note 2=-
Book will be in works to tell the prequel of the game.

-=Screen Shots=-

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[alexia]

Interesting premise. Judging by your screenshot, the bushes are too linear. You should make them more random. Also, I noticed some of the rooms are identical to each other even though they're in different houses.

 

[Chaos_Prime]

well the building in the lower right corner is an inn and with the bushes I was checking on something and forgot to change it back.
Tho I was thinking of alittle help in some areas.

 

[Anonymous]

First, that image was stretching your post and making it very hard to read, so I put it in spoilers.

Now, the whole idea that a group is "evil" and doing things just to create chaos and suffering won't work. Villains are people, too. They always have motives for their actions, and they would never do something "evil" just for the sake of being "evil." That only happens in Saturday morning cartoons.

Nightmares can serve a purpose - they can be warnings from our subconcious about things that may happen on the course we're on.

Now on to the screenshot. Your houses are waaay too big, and the enteriors are too open and empty. Almost all your furniture is crowded against the southern wall. Make them smaller, and spread out the furniture. You'll find placing some so that they're partially covered by the northern wall will help give the map a sense of depth. It's a big problem in the classroom - shouldn't there be an open space for the teacher to give lectures from in front of the desks?

 

[Chaos_Prime]

@Ccoa: thanks for the spoiler thing, cause I don't know what dose that.
And the classroom building, it isn't a classroom it's a small library, and also the Nightmares there evil due to what a Dreamweaver has done(witch will be explained in the story). As for the Dreamweaver that caused or what the other weavers are calling creating, he sorta did a ritual to try to get a weaver back from Nightmare World, but it went wrong and caused the weaver to call Nightmare prisoners from Nightmare World into Dream World(sorry for the now information on the Nightmares)

 

[Lexy]

to do spoilers type this

spoiler in [ ] then end what goes in the spoiler with /spoiler in [ ] you can also put after spoiler =blah blah blah to name the spoiler hope that helps

 

[Chaos_Prime]

@Graxiplon thanks for that little info.

 

[Lexy]

no problem but it kinda sounds like Marchen Awakens Romance in that anime a kid named Ginta is taken to the world of MAR Heaven and he has to defeat the Chess-No-Koma there.

 

[Chaos_Prime]

-=OK revisions to past screen shot post=-

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http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/8167/asharavillagerevisedfs6.png[/IMG]

I hope I did the spacing right because I'm not that good with mapping.