[WIP][CHAR] Airship!

[Alistor]

This is an Airship I'm working on.. It's still a WIP, so any C&C would be good.
I am aware i still need to do:

• Shading
• Possible landing and takeoff animations

Like I said, any C&C is welcome.

Spoiler: The Airship v2.0

 

[Tim.]

I dont understand how the left/right frames are side view and how the up/down frames are front view. Also, make the black lines on the balloon a darker shade of the balloon color, that way it looks more fabric-y.

 

[Prexus]

Shape wise, its very nice. Problem is, the perspective is way off.

 

[Alistor]

yah... i just put it in game... ughh... i need to get more work done on this...
the front and rear view are horrible... i musta been high...

 

[JD_Slasha]

Yea I agree. The front and back views aren't so good, but I'm definantely liking the side views. Keep at it.

 

[Shifter]

The Front and rear would work for a mode 7 thing though...sorta....

 

[Alistor]

Ok, started working on a (much better, IMO) new front view for the airship.

It's the second frame of the top row... C&C on this...

Spoiler: Airship v1.1

http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m174/Godlessheart/Airship1.png[/IMG]

 

[JD_Slasha]

Much better front view I think.

 

[Alistor]

First Post edited to remove the horrid first attempt. Updated charset in it's .place

 

[Showkaizer]

You need to fix the sideviews so that you see the upper deck of the carriage going under the baloon. as it is now the carriage is out of perspective.

 

[TheInquisitor]

http://www.rpg-palace.com/inquisitor/He ... plines.png[/IMG]

Some of your lines need to be more curved to make it look like the airship is rounded. Follow the red lines as an example.

 

[Alistor]

Thanks for all the C&C... I had a bit of trouble with the lines on the front and rear views, so i'll see what i can do with those guidelines.

 

[Alistor]

@SK = OK... is this what you meant? i brought the carriage up to meet the balloon... or did you mean something else?


http://i104.photobucket.com/albums/m174 ... sample.png[/IMG]

 

[Aranak]

I think SK meant that the side views look like your looking directly from the side, as apposed to from an incline from above like the front and back views.

 

[Alistor]

*Slap's himself* Duh... i feel like an ass now... I'll get to work on that...

 

[TheInquisitor]

Like so:

http://www.rpg-palace.com/inquisitor/Help-airship2.png[/IMG]

 

[Aranak]

Lol, yeah Inquistor basically drew it out. =P
Id love to see this finished.

 

[Shifter]

Looking much better

 

[Alistor]

First post updated with Version 2.0.

 

[TheInquisitor]

V2 Criticism:

http://www.rpg-palace.com/inquisitor/Help-airship3.png[/IMG]