White ties battler templates

[nazra7]

White ties Adult battler template with melee weapons:

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http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n250/Nazra7/whitetiestemplateadult.png[/img]

credits:
me, nazra7.
dollmage, for the image size and animation list.
mack, for the head.

I also plan on making the following:
adult template with bow
the above template weapons with children
the above template weapons with humanoid monsters and other races, like fairies and nekos

hope you guys like it. give me critisism if you want ^^ I will also post some made battlers with the templates soon.

 

[nazra7]

didn't you guys want this? I'm suprised I didn't get any replies yet...

Anyway, here I've made a battler with the template. The Dervish:

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http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n250/Nazra7/dervish.png[/img]

please guys tell me how it looks.

 

[Third333strike]

Awsome! Finally a white ties template....looks pretty good too.

Theres some people making a side view battler generater.  You should submit this too them, or i could if you dont mind.

They need a template.

Great work!

 

[nazra7]

sure, where can I see them and their generator? I would prefer to submit it myself. Can you tell me the url? Thanks for the comment.

 

[Valcrist]

It's me. I'm gonna work with Punk and several good spriter to make a Sideview Battle Generator. But we are waiting for Punk to finish the new homepage for RMXPUniverse. The link to the topic is below

RMXPU Online Sideview Battler Generator:
http://rmxpuniverse.com/forum/showthread.php?t=967

Please give me your e-mail addres or your MSN so i can contact you later. We are still waiting for Punk confirmation about this generator.

 

[TwistedDragon]

TRIZZLE THE SHIZZLE UP MY DIZZLE!!!  :fap: :fap: :fap:  :fap: :fap: :fap: :fap: :fap: :fap: :fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap::fap: !!!!

yeah..
This is looking good my friend!, Can't wait to more spriters is gonna make some Battlers now , (I also heard that Cherry is going to give it a Try )

Continue the Awesome "raw" job :ssj:

 

[Grathea]

Well, it's not too bad.
There are a few problems with it, though.
It's not exactly 'White Ties', per se. The RTP heads really ruin that. I'm sure it'd be easy enough to use and edit a head from an existing battler?
Also, the arms are really fucked up.
In the first row, the elbows region is too large and doesn't curve properly.
Second row: Far arm (his right) is WAY too small.
Third row: Nothing much, although the body does look a little thin.
Fourth row: The back goes in a pixel too much, I think.
Fifth row: The close leg and arm really jump out as needing a little improvement on this one. The arm is missing some parts of the outline, especially.
Sixth row: See above.
Seventh row: In the second frame, the body should cast a shadow on the arm. Also, the near shoulder seems strange to me.
Eighth row: The shoulder again. The pecs are a pixel or two high, as well.
Ninth row: See seventh row.
Tenth row: The near arm moves really weirdly. Try making the movement a little more fluid.
Eleventh row: Shading is messed up for the light source. Don't just rotate an existing row, actually reshade it as well.

If you make these simple changes, I can see this really going somewhere.

 

[nazra7]

ok I'll look into it, I'm a horrible shader though and I thought that the script for the battle system these goes with was by a person named white ties so that was a little misunderstanding for me. Thanks for the comments people.

 

[rikuken]

  How come in one row his hat is part white and the rest isn't? Oh yeah and I think I'm gonna use this.

 

[Mustardy85]

didn't you guys want this? I'm suprised I didn't get any replies yet...

Anyway, here I've made a battler with the template. The Dervish:

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http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n250/Nazra7/dervish.png[/img]

please guys tell me how it looks.

Dude! Thaaaaaaaaaaaaat Owns it! It's awesome! keep it up and you'll be the next RMXP.org's best spriter!

BTW do you have a normal walking spriteset for that?

 

[afterlife]

  How come in one row his hat is part white and the rest isn't? Oh yeah and I think I'm gonna use this.

uhhh... I think thats the back of the scyth cause if you look at the other parts you can see the pointed back of it... I stared at it for a while before noticing it....
anyway nice sprite..

 

[Masquerade]

It's a good template if you are just going to putt another pre-made spriter over it.
However, if you actually want people to sprite over it, like a common charset template, you have a lot of work to do.
The arms are fucked up (they are too small), the legs are fucked up (awfully shaded) and someplaces the animation is fucked up (it's just the same image, with no move).

 

[JosephSeraph]

It could use "some" more work on it.
i´d say a lot.Sorry

One thing you should evict: COPY´n PASTE BODY PARTS... this should definately be avoided.really, it makes the image decrease from fluid to some (crappy) frankensprite, i don´t want to be rough, it is just that i love white ties, and i want this template done.a terrible example of crappy frankensprite is the hurt pose, you clearly turned his face and used almost all the body from the first pose(that looks like he is scratching his whatever, you know...)
his third pose have a dirty pose, even tough you didn´t intended it(what i am sure of), you did it, and you should change it.
The fourth pose´s legs are deformed, strange, one bigger than another, like if he dislocated one of his legs.Note:If you can´t shade, don´t submit shaded templates until you get the grasp, it´d be ,more useful if it was unshaded(if i was going to use it, i´d remove all the shades.)
sorry to bother, but i can´t continue criticating. sorry....

Don't. Freaking. Necropost. >:| ~Asch