Volcano

[gboichris]

Note to players:The world of Volcano is a massive world and it won't be viewed in one game alone.These games could go on for years. At the moment I'm only focused on the current game, which in fact is a prequel to the real stages of the game. Part two will explain much more about what the Volcanoes are and will give players a better outlook and understanding of what they're playing.

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• About the Demo:[/FONT]The demo has been removed until the game is more complete.[/FONT][/FONT]

Spoiler: Story

Beginning:A young boy is found in the wilderness by a girl. He don't know how he got there, but he calls himself Prince Sergeo, of the Volcanians. The girl believes him and ask why is he out here. This is where the story begins.

Background:The world of Volcanians dated back many centuries when the end of the world was among the people of earth. Many people were killed when every volcano in the world exploded causing the ultimate crisis. As the lava flowed across the planet a special aura traveled with it and when it touched a human they didn't burn but instead transformed into demons known as Volcanians. For centuries they roamed the planet seeking more power only to be attacked by those who survived the crisis. This caused a major war and in the end the Volcanians won and took control over the planet. Over the years the evil among them begin draining away and they began looking normal and human again. This was due to some of the Volcanians mating with humans. There was still some bad ones that opposed this and slaughtered the humans and cursed the babies that were born. This caused another war and this times the humans won and the evolution for Volcanians were final. This age was anew and now it is the present where evil still murks in the shadows. And that evil is about to emerge again!

Spoiler: Characters

Main Characters
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-Sergeo-
Age: 16
HometownDark Region-Volcanic Kingdom
Background: This is Sergeo the hero of the game.He seeks revenge on his Ultra enemy Vander who killed his entire family.Through out the game he will learn that everything he thought was the truth was nothing but lies.

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-Rebecca-
Age:16
HometownDark Region-Unknown
BackgroundRebecca saves Sergeo after he is chased from his home by monsters.She ultimately helps him out on his quest to kill Vander.Like Sergeo Rebecca also lost her parents, but she was very young when they was killed.There's more to Rebecca than meets the eye.

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-Tobo-
Age:12
HometownDark Region-Unknown
BackgroundRebecca's little brother who was only a baby when his parents died.Raised by his sister Tobo seems to stay in trouble with the law and his life.At first Tobo seemed like a bad boy that just stay in trouble but overtime he changes.The only thing is, is it for the better or the worst.

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-Buro-
Age:18
Hometown:Wind Region-Faire Village
BackgroundA 18 year old warrior to the fullest,Buro is a trained knight who helps Sergeo out on his quest to kill Vander.He never knew his father since he died but his mother is still living and she protects her only son more than anything.

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-Ano-
Age:19
Hometown:Earth Region-Catapult Village
BackgroundA scientist who use to work in Volcanic Kingdom.After the destruction he is thought to be dead just like everyone else, but he somehow survives.The real question is how did he survive ?

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-Timber-
Age:Unknown
Hometown:Nature Region-Eastshow Woods
BackgroundA mysterious tiger that helps Sergeo out in the beginning.Very little is known about him,but he is never forgotten as the game continues.

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-Sandy-
Age:20
Hometown:Fire Region-Middleton Port
BackgroundSandy life turned when she got pregnant at sixteen years old and the father of the baby ran away and never came back.Her parents called her bad names and threw her out on the streets leaving poor Sandy with a daughter that they didn't accept.Sandy left Middleton and settled down in Del Vel Sol Village where some nice people took her in and help Sandy get back on her feet.She soon becomes that towns savior.

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-Valeria-
Age:19
Hometown:Earth Region-Maroon Town
BackgroundValeria is a cocky,stubborn,and spoiled brat that's what everyone sees him as.As spoiled as he may be he's also a very caring person and tries to help people in need.Valeria's past definetly affected what he is today and many blame his parents who were too busy with other rich people affairs.

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-Bron-
Age:17
HometownDark Region-Desire Slums
BackgroundBron has had the worst life anyone could have,but he stayed strong and continued on his quest to seek revenge on Sergeo.What has Sergeo done to him and why does Bron hate him so ?

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-Lucy-
Age:Unknown
Hometown:Unknown
BackgroundLucy's not only a mysterious little kitty,but she can also talk which took the heroes by surprised.After several encounters Lucy joins on the quest to help them destroy the evil pestering the world,but what are her true motives ?

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-Vulcan-
Age:Unknown
Hometown:Unknown
BackgroundWho is he and what is his purpose in the world ?

Other Characters
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-The King-         
Age:42
HometownDark Region-Volcanic Kingdom
BackgroundThe king of Volcanic Kingdom who's trustworthiness got him and the rest of the nobles killed.

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-The Queen-
Age:40
HometownDark Region-Iberville Vilage
BackgroundThe Queen of the Kingdom and the mother of Sergeo.She along with the rest of the nobles was killed in a brutal battle in the beginning of the story.More about her is known as you progress through.

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-Grandpa-
Age:63
HometownDark Region-Volcanic Kingdom
BackgroundSergeo's grandpa and trainer who has trained Sergeo and his two son's since they was small.All though he won't stay in the story long he's actually one of the most important characters and more is learned about him as the story goes on.

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-Village Elder-
Age:61
Hometown:Wind Region-Faire Village
BackgroundThe ruler of Faire Village and the kindness person in the world.The Elder took care of Rebecca and Tobo after the parents died.To them he is their grandfather.

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-Captain Gasper-
Age:34
Hometown:Fire Region-Middleton Port
BackgroundThe one with all the Arr in him.He helps the heroes travel the seas with his unfaithful crew and Silver Bird that's what he call his ship.

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-Kratz-
Age:18
Hometown:Earth Region-Maroon Town
BackgroundKratz true importance lies in the distant future, but as for now he's a training sky knight.

Villains

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-Vander-
Age:Unknown
HometownDark Region-Unknown
BackgroundSergeo's enemy and the main villain of the game.He destroyed Sergeo's entire family.

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-Billy-
Age:24
HometownFire Region-Middleton Port
BackgroundSandy's evil brother. It is believed he works for the Dark Circle.

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-The Dark Circle-
Mysterious Group of very strong individuals. It is still not known what they're up to, but it's definitely something very evil.
Members
Serviore
Terivan
Elef
Tobatha
Vander(former member)

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-Doman-
Age:33
HometownUnknown
BackgroundEx-Leader of X-Squad and main villain in Chapter 2.

Spoiler: Official Page

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Spoiler: Team

Team
Dark Command
ShadowLink001
Sasuke446
Yivyn

Spoiler: Credits

Credits
Ruruga-Facesets
Grandor-Title Screen
The Inquisitor-World Map
Oceans Dreams-Game Over Screen
RoguePL-Battlers

Graphics
Jadak
Grandor
Ccoa
RoguePL
Oceans Dreams
Strawberry Quartz
Joymason
Hot Toke
I Etolier
Loose Leaf
First Seed Material

Spoiler: Scripts

Scripts
Advanced message Script by Dubealex
Reflection, Shadow, and Train Actor Scripts by Rataime
Raziel's Chrono Trigger CMS and Battle Report Scripts
Momomo's Bestiary
The_Darklord's Tax Script
Blizzard's Tons of Add Ons
CCoa's Weather Script

Spoiler: Screenshots

:new: Heres some pics of the game I will be adding more as time comes.

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[gboichris]

Wow 54 views and not a single reply.

 

[Calibre]

Hey man, I know it can be frustrating to have your topics go ignored, especially after the work you have put in... but you really shouldnt bump for 24 hours.

As for the story, it seems a little odd to me. It's called volcano and the BIG IDEA is volcanoes but suddenly they dissapear from the remainder of your story. The four keys and revenge jump out and say "Boring" but the idea of volcanoes and that setting is a bit more original. I would place more emphasis on that.

The screens, whilst not terrible are also pretty bland. It's hard to just say, but try and inject a bit more atmosphere into them, they seem lifeless.

Make it clearer you have a demo, this is my second view of the project and I've only just seen it.

Fix the grammar, spelling and punctuation of your writing, it immeditaely makes people think the dialogue in the game will be error ridden too.

Can I also point out, your screens don't really seem as though they are on volcanic land, it may be good to set the game all in volcanic settings to give it uniquness.

Nice title screen.

Steer clear of having odd one out face graphics - particularly with such an important character.

May I ask if you have spent alot of time on the story? Another direction you could go is using the volcanoes as gods that need to be gifted sacrifices in order to stay dormant. The civilizations that live in danger of these eruptions could be the ones blessed with the spirit of the volcanoes as they were raised in its near vicinity. Therefore a conflict between the normal towns people and the "Volcans" or whatever, with them trying to use the townspeople as sacrifices to their respective volcanoes. Just a premise using the Volcano idea further.

 

[gboichris]

Thats not the whole story I just don't want to spoil everything in the story and and I din't make the demo clear because there's a bug in it and I don't want now one to download it for nothing.Also the screenies will be updated because they have changed.Thanks for the idea on the story although not saying to much thats kinda what the story may revolve into.Thanks for the idea on the Volcanic feel to the game will definetely use it and everyone plz don't play the demo until I confirm its safe to play.

I will update everything tonight so stay tuned.

 

[Diedrupo]

looks cool. can you post some credits (for the art) so we know what is yours and what isn't? thanks.

 

[gboichris]

New pics plz tell me what you think of them.

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[Elijah von Bose]

Your grammar and spelling and punctuation are terrible.

Sergeo, are you ready to go yet?

I grew up in the slums, where no one cared how the people lived.

Rebecca, I miss Mom and Dad.

(Those last two, before you general grammar-hounds attack, are 'cause they're referring to exact people, therefor being proper nouns. It's just the way it seems right to me.)

You may also want to grammar-check your story-lines and such. I spotted a few errors.

As for the game: It looks a bit cliché, but hey, who cares. Your story is your story. Also, you used ultimate twice in your first two character biographies. Kind of weird, but hey, that's cool too. That's your thing.

I like the title screen, not especially fond of the ONE Naramura face-set intruding, but hey. It sets the main bad guy apart, which is cool as well. Anyways, on the whole, it looks alright. Those bugs should be fixed before you post it, because they sound like easy enough ones to fix. Good job so far, and I hope to see more promising content from you in the future.

Sincerely,
~Dox

 

[gboichris]

Sorry bout the grammar most of it has already been corrected I just didn't update the shots.Thanks for the response as well.Also the bugs has been fixed I just have to updat my demo.

 

[Diedrupo]

game crashed on me when trying to equip the power belt. there was a missing file.

 

[gboichris]

Oh I'm sorry you wasn't supporsed to play the demo yet.It's still in bug mode.I will post the new demo when I'm finished.

 

[Pyromanga]

Very sexy, but stupid! nah.... it's no stupido, It's a teeeeeency(big) bit cliche the way everyone's parents are dying. But everything else is shexy. That tiger thing rocks, never even heard of that... -.- dun dun duuuuuuuuunnnn

 

[gboichris]

I don't quite understand ?

DEMO


The new version is up !

 

[gboichris]

New demo up can I plz get feedback.I would really appreciate it.Thanks !!!

 

[Malachi]

Hmmmm...It was...OK....

 

[gboichris]

Did you play the whole thing ?

 

[Malachi]

I played to the forest. I could'nt play any further because there's no teleport to get into the forest..

 

[gboichris]

Umm I think I made it to where you must hit the action button in the forest, you know the part that goes in, but if its a hassle to people I'll fix it to where any entry is available.

 

[psgels]

I think it's up to the decision of the designer whether or not to make the teleports triggered by the action-button, though if you do, mention it somewhere clear, and be consistent.

 

[gboichris]

bumps

 

[Axerax]

This looks very well thought out. And I like it's idea. The custom remakes of the RTP Battlers and faces look good... one thing though, the younger brother's face looks like a girl, just to inform you, but other than that. Great game, and good luck with it.