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Viator Suscitatio

Viator Suscitatio


What is love?
What is life?
Only the voice of millions shouting means anything in this world.
I will make them shout, I will make them scream for the sovereign love of the Goddess Pain. She call me even now thirsting for the blood of iniquities. I will feed her till she is fat, then devour her.


Story

It is summertime. The wind gyved through the grass and danced among the sycamore leaves. The wind followed the trees through the forest crossing a stream. The willow arched over the cooling water as if washing their hair. Animals communed by the stream drinking, and relaxing. It was then they heard a sound that made them look up and run from their peaceful stream. A woman with white hair walked as if possessed through the stream she paid no attention to her surroundings she just continued to walk. It was as if she had been here before. However she was not alone. Two men followed close behind one of them one also with white hair. As the woman approached the forest ruins lights covers the forest. Meanwhile in Elysium a young boy name Jazz wakes up. It is his sixteenth birthday and according to the tradition of his village must go out into the world and bring back something special for the village. So he set off into the forest and find a young girl with white hair.


Characters
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Jasper "Jazz" Gale
Age: 16
Blood type :EI
Hair color: White
Weapon: Sword
Personality:Jazz is a man of few words. In fact many think he lacks the ability to talk whether this is true or not no one ever knows. He has his own way of getting across his message without speaking. Mostly he points to what he wants everything else you can see in his eyes whether he agrees, or disagrees with something you said or he is mad at you it can all be read in his eyes. He is a loner by nature except for his secret love Aria whom travels with him from town to town.


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Aria Laties
Age: 19
Blood type: ET
Hair color: White
Weapon: Bow
Personality: Aria is cheery, and sunny always happy even when she should not be. Eeva is a diva and always have to have her way because it is what she is use to. As the daughter of the emperor everything she ever wanted she received. She is very loyal to those she make friends with and especially to Jazz. She evens out the dark side of Jazz and she knows it. She has no memories of her past life but thanks to Jazz help she will soon find it.

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Eeva Cline
Age: 15
Blood type: II
Hair color: Red
Weapon: Daggers
Personality: Eeva is not like others. Because of her II blood type she tends to be social and unsocial. She takes her life pretty seriously and is determined to live on in her new lifestyle of being a consort. She can be fun to be with and open, but in the end she might stab you into the back. She's not a two-faced person, but when she feels betrayed she'll take revenge. She doesn't stand lying and if she lies herself she only does it when it's the right choice. She can be humble but tends to subdue people to her power. She likes to dominate in relationships.

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James Blake
Age: 24
Blood type: AQ
Hair color: Brown
Weapon:Gun
Personality:James is a bit egotistical and like to have control. James is a narcissus and think he is very handsome and his vanity has even made him a idol in Geffa. He hates his father who tries to control him. James' father was once Magnus of Geffa but broke the laws thus making James King. He tries his best not to go home so he does not have to deal with his father and mostly run the kingdom through corespondent.He rather be in the country side walking through the kingdom.

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Momo
Age: 5
Blood type: ET
Hair color: Brown
Weapon: Stick
Personality:Momo is quiet and shy. Her only friend is her stuffed cat Hanabusa and she often talks to him. As a pure mage student she is timid and nice to her classmates. She is known as the tea fairy because she always serve tea and cookies in class to her classmates. She frightens easily but do not get her wrong. What frightens her is someone coming behind her saying boo. When she is on a training mission her true abilities come through.

Antagonists

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Zephyr
Age:???
Blood type: ET
Hair: White
Weapon: Magistera loaded scythe
Personality:Zephyr seems like a nice guy to many and that is why he is accepted. But away from the idiotic masses Zephyr is very loud, short-tempered, insane, and destructive, He hate everyone and everything and later his true plans become known.
He is so loved by his people that they began to create a religion around him. Thus now strive to become a true God and destroy the world only to rebuild it in his image. He has a sadistic sense of human finding genocide the height of hilarity. He is after a princess with the powers of the ancient ones who inhabited the planet before humans.

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Nina&Mina
Age: 20
Blood type: A
Hair: Black
Weapons:Staff
Personality: Nina and Mina are twins who work as assassins, spies, and are the most loyal to Zephyr ever since he saved them from being crucified. Because of their link to the ancients they have become useful to Zephyr and will not betray him even if he betray them. Nina is loud, and boisterous while Mina is quiet and only speak when necessary.


Game Info

Bloodtypes: On the planet Meadus all life begins within the confines of the planet. The blood of the earth or lifeblood is the source of all things on Meadus. There are ten different types of lifeblood:

ET: This is the purest of all the lifeblood and is said to come from the ancients whom lived on this planet long ago. Those with this bloodtype tend to be nature loving and have the ability to hear those who have joined the lifeblood.

EI: Those of this bloodtype are half ancient. While they are not purebloods they have some of the same abilities as the ancients.

AQ:Anyone of this bloodtype are of noble blood and carry the powers of the nobles. They tend to be snobby because of their blood, and are close to Godom.

II: Those of this bloodtype are blooddrinkers, or vampires. They have amazing strength and are sensitive to sunlight. They are extremely allergic to silver. II bloodtypes have the ability to transform a person into their bloodtype unless of ET or EI blood.

A:A are of the most normal lifeblood. The only difference is that they can easily find and recognize ancients.

E:Normal Humans

Locales

Elysium: A small forest provence beside a creek. The people of Elysium know each other from birth. They are a happy peaceful people and live in the forest to keep their peace. Unless you were born in Elysium you will never be able to find it.

Geffa: The Provence of magic. Many of those who wish to learn the powers of the old ones or ancients come to this city. The city itself is floating above the clouds through ancient magicite. Geffa is the second biggest city in Meadus.

Albaran: The imperial Provence. This city is the home of Laties family or the Imperial family. From it majestic look to it's many districts Albaran is the third biggest.

Ghaltas Keilm: The Provence of Zephyr built on a mountain top GK is the biggest city in Meadus. With such a city her is gathering people to him and indoctrinating them into Tel'kemer a religion and army which put him as God. At the center of the city is the Ghaltas tower where Zephyr resides. Not only is GK the biggest but has the biggest army MARS.

Junas: The smallest provence in Meadus Junas is a city who soul purpose is to teach the people the story of the ancients.

Niffelea: This is the provence of the vampires. Any humans who come through this town is fair game unless given permission by Queen Remilia V who rules the vampires of Niffelea.

Classes
Swordsman
Priestess(uses both support and damage weapons while carrying a bow)
Hawker(Gunner)
Ninja(Thief)
Nightmare(Pure Mage)
Deathbringer(Zephyr)

Game Information

Schools: In order to learn a skill you must go to a school for it. They are:
1.Arcanology(Nightmare)
2.Theology(Priestess)
3.Hoplology(Swordmans)
4.Genomology(Hawker)
5.Threacology(Ninjas)

Religions: In the world of Meadus there are essentially 3 religions and 1 cult. They are:

Vanim: Is the religion of love. Those who believe in this religion serve the Goddess Eldárwen Felagund who watches over those who believe in love. Their temple is in Geffa

Iant: This is the religion who see the ancients as gods and their reincarnations as living gods. The spread the words of natures often sending acolytes into rough places to spread the word.

Tel'kemer: Those of this religion believe in power and chaos. Their God is Zephyr who will destroy the world and remove the disease that is humanity. Everyone in this religion automatically joins MARS

Wilwarin: The cult of Wilwarin follows the teaching of Calvin Wilwarin a man who believe that living alongside of the earth without the need for what make life comfortable is the way to go. They are Meadus hippies and spread the message of peace and love.


Summons
Summons are made from magistera that is drenched in lifeblood. It take on the characteristics of the person, animal, or plant which became lifeblood. Only great priestesses with ancient blood can truly control them. They are:

Hwesta: Summon of the wind
Rist: Summon of Blades
Fuin: Summon of Darkness
Lhûg: Summon of Dragons
Kemen: Summon of the Earth
Nar : Summon of Fire
Annon: Summon of the Gate of Hell
Glin: Summon of Flare
Erulissë: Summon of Grace
Aina: Summon of Holy
Del: Summon of Horror
Heleg: Summon of Ice
Ithil: Summon of Tide
Amar: Summon of Apocalypse

Belacantos
Belacantos are song with special abilities. Belcantos can do things from healing everyone in the party to putting mega barrier on them. Only a Priestess can use the Belacantos for the sake of the party. But it can only be used once per battle.


Rage
Rage is a special skill that each character has. Rage happens when the patient health has gone down considerably. You can either learn rages from a book or from using it over and over.

Screenshots
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Oh my higgly diggly thingy.

I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO START!!!

The characters look typical and I don't understand the story...

And the mapping... is plain... add flowers to it

OBVIOUS MAP ERROR: Everything in the first map. Fire, trees, and grasses.

btw, I think there is too little information right now.
 
Well basically the story is about a woman with ancient blood who when entering a ruin loses her memory. This is when Jazz finds her collapsed on the ground and cares for her. He is immediately smitten by her and swears to follow her until she regains her memory. Basically the story is about Jazz becoming a man, falling in love, and learning his true self. This is while he make friends, and fights for the safety of the woman he loves. Also i added more info.
 
MOMO has no friends except her stuffed animal, yet she serves tea and cake to her friends in class?

Having Aria be both a character and a skill type will probably confuse people, by the way!
 
Bloodtypes: On the planet Meadus all life begins within the confines of the planet. The blood of the earth or lifeblood is the source of all things on Meadus. There are ten different types of lifeblood:

ET: This is the purest of all the lifeblood and is said to come from the ancients whom lived on this planet long ago. Those with this bloodtype tend to be nature loving and have the ability to hear those who have joined the lifeblood.

EI: Those of this bloodtype are half ancient. While they are not purebloods they have some of the same abilities as the ancients.

AQ:Anyone of this bloodtype are of noble blood and carry the powers of the nobles. They tend to be snobby because of their blood, and are close to Godom.

II: Those of this bloodtype are blooddrinkers, or vampires. They have amazing strength and are sensitive to sunlight. They are extremely allergic to silver. II bloodtypes have the ability to transform a person into their bloodtype unless of ET or EI blood.

A:A are of the most normal lifeblood. The only difference is that they can easily find and recognize ancients.

E:Normal Humans

Wow. These sorts of things in fiction always make me feel uncomfortable, but to codify it like this?! I know a lot of people around here might (and probably do) have things like this around here, but I clicked onto yours and have seen this because it is a Final Fantasy fangame, so this is really just about picking on you, but do you think there is a way you could revise this, or in the very least, not be so... up-front about it?
 
Hmmm, the mapping needs improvement. And maybe you should change the title. This doesn't feel much like Final Fantasy, at all. And that crucifix scene could be pretty disturbing to some people.
 
Well you have to remember there have been worse scenes in FF. In FF you got everything from genocide, suicide,unnecessary murder, and lets not forget the urge to destroy all life. Basically my game is sort of the darkside of FF. I'm taking all the bad things of FF and placing them in one game. I mean if Kefka designed a FF game it would probably be like this. If you think this is bad wait for the other screen shots. :D
 
The maps are bad, and BUGGY.

I'm going to expect your other maps are buggy too if you don't fix this one.

And I don't understand what you mean.
 
FF6's genocide didn't show blood or much of anything more than OH GOD MY INTESTINES *poof*. I don't understand why you can't just take "FF" out of the title. Like... your summons aren't even the same.
 
Well if you check instead of using the name Shiva i used Heleg same summon but diff name.

Nar=Ifrit

Aina= Alexander

Kemen= Titan or Brothers whichever u prefer

Amar= Ark,Eden,Knights of the round

Btw it can be a FF game and not have the same old summons look at each FF there are summons you know, and some that are brand new. I got a mixture too. I just changed the names.

Also if i was making a reg game i would take it off but I am making a FF game. It may not seem like it to u but I ask you to wait and see the demo before you truly think about it.
 
Oh boy...

Ripped off Animu facesets? Check.
White haired pretty boy antagonist? Check.
Creepy stalker twins? Check.
Final Fantasy? Check.
Mysterious girl the hero blindly follows? Check.
Grammar rape? Check.
Poor mapping? Check.

All you need is some crystals and you have a full blown newbie cliche clusterfuck here, my friend. I think you need to read a bit more on how to write a story and how to come up with new ideas or at least find a way to present old ideas in a unique manner before you continue further on this.
 
Rule one in mapping:

NEVER EVER combine 2 different object in the tileset, it looks ugly... change you trees to make them normal.


^_^

Im not saying nay but im not saying Yay either...

Some suggestions would be to:

1. Not make it a FF fangame... there really is no need to. Be original.

2. Work on your mapping. Read some tutorials, they helped me a lot when it came to mapping.

3. Story needs some help. Be original...i love originality.

Ill be checking the next update, it better be good...or else.

(Oh and Good Luck)

^_^
 
AIYO 給比賽我承認的一機會意志ya我應該太簡單地改變標題和地圖r,但我是新的對RMXP和學會,因為我去geez。

Sorry about the rant, anyway I am changing the title........i hope you guys are happy now geez. As for the map I am working on it as we speak.
 
Oh my, you speaking Chinese?

I am bad at Chinese ( shame on me, I'm a Chinese )

however here's the translation:
AIYO for competes opportunity will ya which I acknowledged I to change the title and map r too simply, but I am new to RMXP and the academic society, because I go to geez.

STUPID TRANSLATOR :pissed:

And you need to FIX the maps, until now it isn't done... no seriously...
Asch's post is epic.

EDIT: According to your AIYO slang, you might be a Singaporean or Malaysian ( Seen many Malaysians in this forum breaking rules and being a noob like me now :( )
 
Actually I am Taiwanese and I was basically saying that i know i need to work on my maps and the change the title but i will not change my story.
 
Sanguine":2mlbx629 said:
... anyway I am changing the title........i hope you guys are happy now geez...

It's your game. If you want it to be a FF fangame, then let it be so. The problem isn't that its a FF fangame, but that it looks bad and needs work. The maps you posted are plain with some errors, and the story is strange and confusing. There is a mapping improvement thread in RM Discussion, I believe, where you could look to get some help to improve your maps. (Not trying to beat the dead horse, but no one mentioned it so...)
 
Sanguine":24gxlnya said:
Well you have to remember there have been worse scenes in FF. In FF you got everything from genocide, suicide,unnecessary murder, and lets not forget the urge to destroy all life. Basically my game is sort of the darkside of FF. I'm taking all the bad things of FF and placing them in one game. I mean if Kefka designed a FF game it would probably be like this. If you think this is bad wait for the other screen shots. :D

My other point being is that crucifixtion is SO not appropiate for a FF fangame, FF isent that dark. Sure theres genocide, suicide, but I dont remember unnecessary murder. But they were all tiny things to add to the much more important main story.

But yeah, this needs alot of work. That first map brings intense pain to my eyes.
 

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