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very much WIP - Ideas

Alright, I actually had a quick 10 minutes to sketch something today, but it's severely... well fu-gly and quick, bare with me, i haven't drawn in ages, especially not "anime" style in years, and as stated before, its a 10 minutes sketch

She isn't the main character (since for some reason the main characters of my projects always end up being shadows in my head until the world is fleshed out a bit more)

Also note that I never really posted anything in forums before, I'm too perfectionist for that, but I was told to do so, even more if I wanted to improve

http://www.pandora-games.com/images/ros/phoenixgirl001.jpg[/img]

So yea, ideas? I was starting her as a priestess or some sort, but i'm still not too sure about it. Might eventually be a character of the game
 

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There's not really much to critique on......If you want her to be a priestess, well, she doesn't look like one.  She reminds me of Jeannie from I Dream of Jeannie.  She could also pass as a bellydancer.  But really, I see her as more of a magic-using character than a priestess.
 
Tindy":11wynh7y said:
There's not really much to critique on......If you want her to be a priestess, well, she doesn't look like one.  She reminds me of Jeannie from I Dream of Jeannie.  She could also pass as a bellydancer.  But really, I see her as more of a magic-using character than a priestess.

yea, was aiming toward that as well
and whats "I dream of Jeannie"? o.0
 

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Ashtoreth":3hxivxmn said:
and whats "I dream of Jeannie"? o.0
....That's not possible.  You've never heard of I Dream of Jeannie?! *headdesk*

http://www.popculturemadness.com/Polls/Celeb-Pics/Jeannie.jpg[/img] A TV show from the 1960's that starred Barbara Eden as Jeannie, a pouty genie discovered by astronaut Tony Nelson(played by Larry Hagman.)
 
I never heard of it 2....=(

Anyway, your right for one thing it does not look that much like a princess, unless you go into aladin, princess jasmin. Then I guess it could sorta be one. but if you go into like king and rulers of the mid-evil time Then She might want to have a dress, with a small crown, or a long skirt and shirt. Or if your going for  modren day's, like today's, then try out some like dresses with your favorite brand, lol. jk. No but really for these day's type of princess give them a long gown/dress with gold pieces atached to it. For a futureristic princess try making them wear something that looks extreemly soft, and verry long, and again dresses or a shirt and skirt in this case.

Well those are just my appinions to princesses.
We all have different thoughts on how we think a princess should look.

Ps:
Were might I watch this show "I dream of Jeannie" ?


Well those are just my appinions to princesses.
 
Were might I watch this show "I dream of Jeannie" ?

You don't want to see it. It's terrible. Incredibly predictable plot lines, just another Technicolor tv show.

You'd have to give it more detail before we can give any feedback. It's good, if thats what you want to hear.
 
priestess not princess ;)

Basically it was just a very rough sketch for a spellcaster/priestess, I'm still at the very development stage right now, most of the story is written, characters are somehow developed roughly, but no real sketches/character art has been made.

Music is also being written so yay for that hehe

I'll try to work on some more "character design" sketches and what not during the weekend and post them around for ideas/feedback
 

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