Urania: the Two Worlds

[RAWR]

Okay this game is about an Orphan that barely knew his parents when they got killed. He just roamed the streets of Walkins town at the age of 5 or younger. He grows up and figures out that the person that killed his mother and father is the main Criminal of the war that he gets Drafted to. He gets special orders from the Captian to go out alone. Along his way he meets new friends and other people........AND that is all i have right now :P ( your person is arshes unless i get some ppl in my team. I will take anything and anyone that would make my game better.I will put you in my credits)

 

[Aran]

Flaming other's projects is bad

- psgels

Take a look at other project topics b/c the first post needs a LOT of work.

 

[RAWR]

Im new at this stuff so..yea':|

 

[eternal_magus]

Aran, you should phrase things more constructively and think of better ways to help than just "look at all the other better games than yours on the forums and make yours better!". While this can work, it's not the only way to improve. A good way is to ask yourself a lot of questions about your original ideas. For example, what happened to him while he was roaming the streets? How did he manage to go from a five year old roaming the streets to a man in an army. There must be some more story there. Also ask questions about the characters, what was the motivation of the man who killed his parents? How did he then become the main criminal of the war etc.

If you keep asking these kinds of questions you will be inspired (hopefully) into answers that enrich your story, without anything from the outside coming in and affecting it. It makes it more original to just come from your head. Also, once you have good characters and you know them well enough, they can sometimes affect the outcome of the story. If you think "I want the story to do this" but then realise "that's not what this character would do at all!" you'll have a new interesting direction for the plot to go down.

Good luck.

 

[RAWR]

Thanks for backing me up Magus....And I would get screen shots but my comp is gay

 

[psgels]

Hmm, why would taking screenshots be hard on your computer? Do you have a slow connection?

Also, you've got a fairly good premise for your game. Now all you've got to do is keep working on it. Just take Magus' advice, and the story could become quite interesting. Just remember not to let the other people join your main character just because it sounds "fun".

 

[Aran]

@RAWR: I apologize, man. I didn't know you were new ^^.

 

[RAWR]

Its okay Aran

And i dont know why i cant take screen shots ':| ive got advice by pressing the Print screen button but it never works and the pic. script never works on my game

 

[Sapphire]

Press the print screen button, open paint and use "paste". then your screenshot will be in paint, you can save it and upload it for example on imageshack.us . hope that's helpful...

 

[RAWR]

Sweet! thanks everyone!

-edit- err....how do i get them to show up on here?
-edit 2- nvm

 

[RAWR]

Here are some screen shots

 

[Rare]

I have to be honest here. The first map made me want to throw up, the last one was a relief.

The last one is quite good, it just needs some more detail. The others..not so good. I suggest reading some of the mapping tutorials! Im sure they would help.

Good luck with your game! It sounds very interesting. ^^;

 

[Pyromanga]

Interesting, Cliche, Yet Original. I like That.
But....
What Does 'The Two Worlds' have to do with the story, are two worlds gonna go boom and release baddies?
or will you explain it later?

 

[RAWR]

:D well i cant tell you >> it would ruin the end
-edit- If you help you can figure it out :D

 

[RAWR]

Bumppedeh

 

[RAWR]

Bumpeh (I have a new event thingy....you can go into a house on a map and the roof disapears so you can see into the house and you can walk around in it and then when you walk out it shows that you have been in there befor