Tyr's Kingdom: Amulet Of Theos

[arexandar]

Tyr's Kingdom
Amulet Of Theos

Plot:

Spoiler

Thomas lived in a quiet village with his father who was the blacksmith of the town. His father asks Tom to go in the forest because he received a letter from his Uncle that he was wounded and needed help near the water fall.

Tom goes to the water fall and notices a amulet beside his dead uncle. Ignoring his uncle, He walks toward the amulet and examines it. He remembers what was going on and decides to go back to the village to tell his father what happened. Tom brings the amulet with him.

Tom gets to the village and he sees everything attacked and on fire. He walks threw the village looking for any survivors. He sees his father laying on the ground half dead. His father dies on him and an old man comes to help Tom.

Tom is older now and the old man known as Grendal told Tom that he knows who attacked the village. Grendal tells Tom to prepare for the journey so Tom Fishes, Mines, Smelts, Smiths, Trains and trades things before his journey.

Tom goes to a town and meets a boy, Luther. He is in a Pub and Luther also was attacked by the bandits. Luther decides to help Tom so they go look for the bandits camp.

Features:

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- Fishing/Mining/Smelting System
- 5+ Mini Quests
- Custom Menu System
- Custom Game Over Screen
- Custom Title Screen

Characters:

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Name: Thomas
About: Lived in a small village with his dad before it got attack. He always wanted revenge on the ones who attack the village and he will soon get it.

Name: Luther
About: Also had his village attacked by the same bandits. He meets Thomas and they both go together to attack the bandits.

Screen Shots:

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Demo:

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Demo v1.0 - http://www.megaupload.com/?d=TP5ZR4AR

 

[moog]

Why do you have two accounts for?

http://rmxp.org/forums/index.php?topic=48725.0 Is this the same as this?

At least this is more organized, so good job on that, but if your going to post so much stuff at least do change your sn so its less obvious???

The story is also very weak and needs much TLC and clarity. Your features are lame and manditory except for the Fishing/mining/etc systems. 10 enemies? What?

Either way, good luck, although I doubt this will get finished.

 

[arexandar]

No, this one is different....
That old forum was my friends.... He stole my game so...
I remaking this one...
Its the same but better.

 

[MukanshinBlack]

That old forum was my friends.... He stole my game so...

O,O

Plot:

Spoiler

Thomas lived in a quiet village with his father who was the blacksmith of the town. His father asks Tom to go in the forest because he received a letter from his Uncle that he was wounded and needed help near the water fall.

Tom goes to the water fall and notices a amulet beside his dead uncle. Ignoring his uncle, He walks toward the amulet and examines it. He remembers what was going on and decides to go back to the village to tell his father what happened. Tom brings the amulet with him.

Tom gets to the village and he sees everything attacked and on fire. He walks threw the village looking for any survivors. He sees his father laying on the ground half dead. His father dies on him and an old man comes to help Tom.

Tom is older now and the old man known as Grendal told Tom that he knows who attacked the village. Grendal tells Tom to prepare for the journey so Tom Fishes, Mines, Smelts, Smiths, Trains and trades things before his journey.

Tom goes to a town and meets a boy, Luther. He is in a Pub and Luther also was attacked by the bandits. Luther decides to help Tom so they go look for the bandits camp.

Sounds very alike to Fable, although Fable's plot is better.  Maybe work on your plot a bit more?

Features:

Spoiler

- Fishing/Mining/Smelting System
- 5+ Mini Quests
- 10 Enemies
- Custom Menu System
- Custom Game Over Screen
- Custom Title Screen

Five mini quests and ten enemies?  I don't think that lack of content should be considered a feature.

All in all, build up your game a little more.  Seems too plain and, like Moogle said, it sounds like a game which will end up unfinished.

 

[moog]

If it was your friends then why the fuck are you and he registered at the same time with the same sort of sn?

There isnt a problem with two, but when you post multiple crap on them that wont get done it just turns to spam.

Also:

Its the same but better.

Then why didnt you just bump that one and edit the first post?

 

[arexandar]

idk, but the demo is up now....

 

[moog]

idk

Wrong answer, but whatever. Good luck with this.

 

[arexandar]

LOL!
ya well idk.



jusy play the demo than make ur bad comments please.

 

[boon]

Sorry...?

This is exactly the same as the other topic, 'cept more organized?

Plus your 'freinds' username is incredibly similar to yours:

arexander
arexthebest

Plus I don't see the demo to be worthwhile to download. The one gameplay screenshot is rather boring, and it looks like you've barely worked much into scripts, windowskins, etc.

Also:
- Fishing/Mining/Smelting System
- Custom Game Over Screen
- Custom Title Screen

Are not features. You should expect a game to have a custom image for the title screen, who'd play a game using the RTP one?

Sorry, but count me out.

 

[dadevvtsvre]

Tom goes to the water fall and notices a amulet beside his dead uncle. Ignoring his uncle, He walks toward the amulet and examines it. He remembers what was going on and decides to go back to the village to tell his father what happened. Tom brings the amulet with him.

Tom sounds like a jerk. Ignoring his dead uncle? Also, the plot sounds waaay too much like Fable. And somehow I doubt that was your "friend's" thread.
At least the maps aren't half-bad.

 

[Magicant]

Your friend stole this? Did he think he just hit the mother-load of awesomeness or something? And I’m with everyone else here when I say; I really don’t believe that you and your friend made a shared account. So cut the bullshit and just admit that you used a second account to spread this crock of manure around the forum. It does sound like a rip of Fable, Tom does sound like an idiot, and this does sound like a bad game. I have to wonder how much thought was actually put into this project. I’m not playing this, and I doubt anyone else will unless they are looking for nominations for Vaporware of the Year.

 

[arexandar]

......thats prety mean..

 

[Erichermit]

Hmm, I think everyone is being a bit too rude to this guy.

The game looks decent actually, the screenshot isn't too bad and while the story is cliche, I don't think it matters much. I probably wont play it because I rarely download anything that isn't completely off-wall awesome. However, I wish you good luck on your project.

Some recommendations for you to get people to treat you better:
-Don't include "Custom Menu/Game Over screen" in your features list, it is, as earlier mentioned, something most people would assume necessary.
-Make sure your posts are done correctly. This one is correct, but I think the main reason for the antagonism directed to you is due to your frequent incorrectly done posts. Be careful with that.
-Stick to a game idea. People lose respect for someone who can't stick to one idea. We all get lots of ideas for lots of different games, but you'll never make even one if you can't stick to an idea.
-Be humble. Don't put yourself down, but I noticed in a previous topic you stated that a game would make you cry. It's kind of asking for ridicule.

and last of all, don't let anyone get you down. Sorry if I seem to be making fun of you or something, but I assure you that I harbor no antagonism to your, I just want to help you become a member of this community.

And I have a couple questions about your game. Why does he ignore his dead Uncle? That seems kind of heartless. O_O And explain your fishing/mining stuff, along with some screenshots of them in action please.

 

[arexandar]

Thanks a lot Erichermit.

Im just gunna continue makign my game..... and see what they saw once its done.


He ignores his dead uncle because the amulet made him not care about what happnd bcause it has evil power. This is kinda a spoiler but,

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The amulet gives you evil magic, makes bad things happen to you, makes you not care about things, and makes only evil people like you if you have it and takes a bigger effect if your wearing it. The main reason why the village was attack was because he had the amulet on him which made bad thigns happen. Making the village and his father die. But when he dropped the amulet a man found him, understand?

 

[boon]

That is an awful way to go about criticism.

Ignore it?

 

[Magicant]

Does the English you use in game meet the same high quality standards you apply when posting on the forums here? I literally imagine the father son death speech going like this.

“Dad, are u dyeing?â€

 

[moog]

“Dad, are u dyeing?â€

 

[boon]

“Dad, are u dyeing?â€

 

[Magicant]

“Dad, are u dyeing?â€

 

[Erichermit]

arex, I didn't say just continue on with your game with the hope of proving them wrong when you finish, you actually have to listen to what these guys say and take it into consideration. Though it may be harsh, they are telling you what it wrong, for the most part, and you should seek to fix that. What I meant was, don't let it convince you to quit or let it get you down. Let it improve you.

An eager desire to improve oneself and a well way to handle criticism is well respected around here.