Twilight of Everleryn Logo design

[Venetia]

IMO it's starting to look a little on the busy side ...

I liked this version personally, just without the tildes or (c):

 

[archerRin]

I kinda agree, but I disliked the flourishes. Maybe Ill try simplifying it more later.

 

[NexS]

I'm afraid i agree completely with venitia. i find it much more appealing than what you have in your avatar for the reason that, though you may have wanted it to look more delicate or detailed, it looks too busy and slightly blurred. having the single lined curly bits is the way to go

 

[candle]

Sorry, NexS, but he's gone a different direction with his logo. You can find the new thread, here

 

[NexS]

lol yeah i noticed... i've been posting on it not realising

doh!