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TURKEY critique

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I need a solid critique and some pointers on what could be possibly wrong with this rtp bird brain
 
I wouldn't have known it was a turkey if you hadn't mentioned it. I think the shading is flat, and the palette won't work with the rtp. The line art is quite jagged and over the place. There are some unnecessary pixels that make it look ugly, but turkeys are ugly so...
 
It has potential. Saturate the color and lighten it up a bit. Add more definite shadow and highlight and let's see it after that.
 

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