ToE Logo Redesign

[archerRin]

Hello, I decided my old logo was trash now that I am more serious about my project.
Im on very low battery and this is incomplete, the magic circle is a quick mockup so it probably isnt final.
Also i will try to spice the typography up more later.

Id say this is about 50% done . Any ideas / feedback? C/C?

edit: Near-final ver

 

[NexS]

I like it. Simple and to the point. though you may want to all a *little* decoration to the text.

don't know about the trademark either >.< lol

 

[dadevvtsvre]

I thought your old logo looked pretty good. But this one is much cleaner so that's a bonus as well.

I don't knwo if it's just me but having the first and last letters bumped up a bit is making it slightly less legible. imo you should try having them at the same level as the rest of the words, I don't really like how they're positioned.

 

[archerRin]

Thanks, looking at it from this work comp with a lower res I think i will play with the letters more like maybe moving the T's down in Twilight instead of going up, so that it will look like the logo is a bit oval . If it's one the same baseline though, it looks too plain.
Also point taken about the TM it needs more adjustment.

 

[MCsephiroth13]

I liked the other one, not that there is anything wrong with this one. If you decide to keep the TM, straighten it out. It looks crooked.

 

[archerRin]

Sigh these are hard words to make a logo for.
But I think I will go with the last one here:

 

[NexS]

yes i agree, the bottom one does look nicer.

what's this one for? i've seen three different logos now, just not sure what they're all going to be used for

 

[archerRin]

@ nexs, thanks for your interest, im trying to remake the logo until its perfect in my eyes

With a script font for the 1st letter:

 

[Jason]

So I have to ask, why have you put the copyright sign on ?

 

[archerRin]

tm is ugly and i cant use R

 

[NexS]

i think he means.... why bother putting any type of copyright on?

personally i don't like the script first letters, makes it too much work to read the words

 

[candle]

First, go back to the other first letters, they were better. Second, keep the "of" in the middle but shift it to the left so it is halfway between the bottom of the first T in twilight and the top of the L in everleryn. You should probably make it a little smaller, too. Third, this is a logo. ANY copyright symbol does not apply. If you want something similar, use the "tm" for trademark, but make it smaller than in the first one. The same size and placement of your current (c) would do.

 

[archerRin]

might be done, ill work on it if i think of something good

 

[candle]

The background is better, but remember to look at my advice.

 

[Akuma209]

This looks cool, id wish i could make your logo the game seems cool, but since your making it i will just shut up and tell you what i think

i like the font its easy read and people would easily understand the depth of your game by just looking at that logo, but you could make it more catching i am not saying put massive effects, but you know like make people stir into it or something you know

 

[MCsephiroth13]

Yeah, make it a little more appealing by adding maybe light beams or glows to it. It'll add more depth and interest.