Title Screen.

[Numb]

Made a title screen for my game, Crystallinus: Dusk.
What do you guys think?

 

[bacon]

The shining light on the left is really distracting, remember simplicity is best when concerning title screens.I would just use one solid font as well. Also, I would center the text just a tad. o:

 

[Sgt. Cookie]

Shurely a picture of a sunset in the background would be best consedering the game is called Crystallinus: Dusk

 

[MCsephiroth13]

The word "Crystallinus" feels too proper, like it was made in Microsoft Powerpoint or something. Try giving it a crystally feel with some tattered edges or something along those lines--make it seem more lively.

 

[Thula]

Why don't you try to blent the words with the image?
And change font, sleek classy fonts that may be versatile, but as now looks plain. Play with letter-spacing, proportions and colors.