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The writing is horrible, and it looks very cheesy. If you want that, it's good; if not, well, it looks very cheesy. I say use a different font instead of the writing, and to not make it cheesy, well, I dunno about that.
Closed by author's request. However, Walid Elhertani, if you want to improve don't run away from criticism, learn to take it and use it to make your work better. The moderation staff isn't here to clean up whenever somebody says something negative about your work.
