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I love the style and textures; a great font choice, though I find the effects applied blends inordinately with the background image. Perhaps add a little something to help distinguish the two? In all, keep up the great work. =)
I think it looks good. As stated a caption for a Mystery Chapter? I like the font but I sometimes feel that fancy fonts are not very legible to the eyes. I Would try to find a nice font similar that worked just as well, just to try.
Also I found a very nice site to get some fonts if this may help, they have lots and lots of them. A lot of these fonts are free unless otherwise noted at the site.