[Title Screen/CRITIQUE]NGCS: Neo Terrra ~LOG-ON

[Eriol Clowphengire]

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What do you think of my title screen?
BTW, it won't use the typical title screen script, but I'll come up with custom buttons on it.

 

[Mascarpone]

holy hexagons batman

it's too busy.. tone it down a little.

 

[seita]

I think it just needs a little smoothing out. The matrix background kind of conflicts with all the bright colors, unless that's what you were going for.

 

[Despain]

horrible. it's absolutely impossible to read and the colors burn the eyee.

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

Oh my, I guess I have to make the texts stand out more, and maybe use a different color on them?

 

[Sonata]

Lose the hexagons and the Matrix background. All that shit might actually look decent if it were on a solid black background.

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w209 ... 1Title.png[/img]
I think this one's a bit better for now, and it now mimics like a real MMORPG.
To spice it up, I might as well make a custom title screen stuff here.

 

[Despain]

don't use japanese. and the text is STILL hard to read. better, and readable, but it doesn't stand out

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

Sorry man, but I kinda liked using Japanese there. Project NGCS was also planned to be a psuedo-anime-ish RPG, think of Evil Zone in an FFT (with .hack influence).

I guess I have to triple it, just like how I've made my Silver Sunflowers title logo before.

 

[Hanzo Kimura]

The N and T Letters
are a little out of place if it will be a futuristic game...


if you like  I can make the texts and the logo better, you can request that to my thread ^^
just offering a hand