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I think the moon is too big...it makes it look EXTREMELY close to the earth, or a random sphere that looks like a moon is just floating around the earth. I have to say too, that the palm trees look out of place because they're tropical when the rest of the scene is grass and the tree on the left doesn't look tropical, course, it could be a fantasy game, too, and in that case then the tropical trees and the moon is fine. I really like the sky though, it's very nice. 
 
It would be better if it was consistant. The top part is sharp and detailed while the bottom is just some brush strokes. Also, I'm not sure if the blue thing is water or something, but it real cuts sharp the 1stpart. Perhaps have some reflection on this water to fix that?
 
The land is much better. The water still doesn't look too right. I really mean a reflection of the upper-part, which should probably gradient-ly fade out. If it could be kinda distorted (water is never fully calm) then it'd look more natural, probably.
 
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/hyelife/LOT-2.jpg[/img]
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/hyelife/LOT-3.jpg[/img]

These two are your best so far, use them. Don't use any 3D rendering or any shit like that. Don't use that crappy one with the stupid cliff that looks like it was drawn by a 3yr old. Use one of these two (preferably the bottom one as the VERY bright colors look amazing against the dark black contrast) but absolutely don't use the other crappy ones.


btw terragen is NEVER an acceptable tool for ANYTHING.
 
omg why did u get rid of the old font for that new one. It's heinous! ><

pick a new font that's clean and simple. then we'll talk everything else @_@
 

Emtch

Member

Prexus":19hgae0f said:
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/hyelife/LOT-2.jpg[/img]
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/hyelife/LOT-3.jpg[/img]

These two are your best so far, use them. Don't use any 3D rendering or any shit like that. Don't use that crappy one with the stupid cliff that looks like it was drawn by a 3yr old. Use one of these two (preferably the bottom one as the VERY bright colors look amazing against the dark black contrast) but absolutely don't use the other crappy ones.


btw terragen is NEVER an acceptable tool for ANYTHING.
Agreed on all of this.
Those two are amazing (are those real clouds?), while the rest are really crappy, sorry I can't say anything creative about them.
 
I second the word of prexus. In my opinion, the only thing I'd change from the orangy yellow one are those silly spike things on the S. Instead turn those in to an over and underline that go above and below the text so that in a sence it frames it
 

Kraft

Sponsor

I changes the 2 that were created a little bit... hope thats okay ^_^  I was originally going to clean up the stars a little bit and make the colors fit together just a little bit better, but these came out lol ^_^
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c299/kraftKiddo/LOT-Kraftorange.png[/img]
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c299/ ... ftblue.png[/img]
CnC please ^_^
 
Kraft":2tdqysdx said:
I changes the 2 that were created a little bit... hope thats okay ^_^  I was originally going to clean up the stars a little bit and make the colors fit together just a little bit better, but these came out lol ^_^
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c299/kraftKiddo/LOT-Kraftorange.png[/img]
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c299/ ... ftblue.png[/img]
CnC please ^_^
ZOMG MOTION BLUR!
Just kidding. These look awesome.
 
Looks like an Time Tunnel.
No idea why.

It looks really good!
Like a... black gap tht's not black, but yellow/blue colored!

When I first saw it, i thought it were two pictures pasted...
Because it is very unrealistic to see the planet "continuing" in the sea, it becomes an sea without bottom, were you can look thruogh.
Just mirror the above part of the planet in the sea, then it would bemuch more realistic.

-Axules :hat:
 

Kraft

Sponsor

Not motion blur lol ^_^

RADIAL blur, and several color changes, and mixes to both dampen a few of the more vivid ones that didnt quite match the rest of it, and to make the dark areas more black, but blurred with the rest.

And then the Radial blur ^_^
 

$t3v0

Awesome Bro

Prexus is right. 3D rendering looks like .... 3D rendering. Unless its done to perfection they all look the same to me.

:x @ me for not seeing multiple pages. Point still stands.
 

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