Title er thing

[Lithium]

It's been several months since I was last on here. Anyways, recently we finished C++ in my high school programming class and since we had time to kill the teacher started teaching us other things, like Photoshop CS3 for one. I'm definitely not going to claim to be an expert at this, I'm relatively new to it, but this is just the result of my fooling around a bit and trying to make a title for a game I've been working at on and off.

http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn13 ... Title2.png[/img]

The name is rater generic so it's liable to change, as is the entire title image itself.

Credit where credit is due:

1.The textures have been gathered from various places across the net with the Google image search, many are liable to change because of this

2.The theme was somewhat inspired from the way the beginning of Chrono Cross was, they don't look the same, but I definitely had Chrono Cross in my mind when designing, so thank you old square soft for your great Playstation 1 game

3.The trim for the book is a downloaded vector not orginally in CS3

(If a more detailed credit section is necessary I'll be more than happy to change this)



Sorry for the length of my post


Edit: I've added in a few things. I've also tried working on the Y some  but it didn't turn out to well and it looks like I may have to  go with a completely different font, I'll update it when done


http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn13 ... tle3-1.png[/img]

This is it with a different font

 

[Devon Jacobs]

The Y should have longer branches(?), just make the V shape longer because it looks like a I.

 

[Mattastic]

I like it. It's one of the better title screens I've seen, I think. Personally, I don't think there's any problem with the Y, but certainly it wouldn't hurt to make the title clearer.

Just an idea: why not try to add the starting menu to the piece of paper that's aligned with the screen? I think that would just complete this.

 

[Love]

Very nice, just modify the Y a little so it could be clearer.

 

[Lithium]

Thank you for all of your comments.

The title was just done in a font where the Y is like that, I'm not sure if I can fix it, but I'll definitely give it a shot because I see what you mean.


To Mattastic:
    That's actually a really great idea that I've never thought of before. Thanks

 

[SakuraPhoenix]

It is a very nice title. I AM reminded very much of Crono when I see this, I can see the inspiration. Nice nostalgic feel to it.