[Thinking of Name] Early Development.

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Name Goes Here- - -

Characters
(Still thinking on this -- Just need a place to post my ideas.)

[Character Name]
Male
Age: 15
Description:
Dark Cropped Hair, Fair skin, 5'6", and a pointed nose.
Role:
Main Protagonist.

Prologue
(Still thinking and tweaking.)

You play as an average fair-skinned 15 year old boy. You live a normal life, go to school, live with two parents, a brother. Life is going great, until the accident. An intense car crash? sends you into a coma, and your brother, the driver, into the emergency room with severe injuries. You hear the cries of your parents while you lie silent in the emergency room. You want to reply, but you cannot. You can't do anything. Suddenly, after listening to your heartbeat for a short time, you awake in an unfamiliar world. You don't recognize anything around you. Strange creatures move about in this dark world. Is there escape from this world?
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Still working on development. But feel free to comment on what I have so far!

 

[Lazer Kirby]

You have a few spelling mistakes. It's coma, not comma. Also, it's pointed, not pointd. The story seems rather fine so far. This is really all I have to comment on.

 

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Thanks, and yes.
I am using an older keyboard right now and frequently the buttons do not work. It's frustrating. I will fix those though