The ZS

[ZephyrSkye]

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I always wanted a template named after me, so this is the ZS. I only have the female standing frame, right now, but tell me what you guys think.

 

[WeaponOD]

I reckon the feet look a bit duckish, but besides that, it Looks alright man, i like it, keep up the good work.

 

[ZephyrSkye]

Like this?

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Oh and I made the male template.

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[Mascarpone]

the male and the female have the same head. That's scary. Females do have different facial structures than men, and since the head is such a notable part of this template, you may want to reflect that a little bit. I know not allot of sprites show that
but..

it's really bothering me in this case for some reason.

 

[ZephyrSkye]

What would you suggest?

 

[Mascarpone]

Well, just for a psychological effect, ditch the hair on both templates because its a very masculine hair and throws off the woman's appeal completely.. The female chin u might give a little more of that Anime-pointedness too. not like a dead sharp angle but a little more.

Actually on further inspection you might also want to maybe separate the males legs out a little more. Male Hip bones curve outward as the feet position more below the shoulders, while women's hips curve inward a little more positioning the feet below the hips.

You also might want to either pump up his shoulders just a bit or drop hers. The only real change you've made between the genders is the torso, and there's allot more to it than that.

Try that, repost and I'll see if i can come up with anything else from there. That help?

 

[ZephyrSkye]

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http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w4/S ... /Temp1.png[/IMG]

And the hair is just the base. The hairline, so people know where to put the real hair.

 

[Mascarpone]

That helps allot. Once you animate it, I'll have more to say about the feet, they might be too out turned, (feel like I'm a nazi yet? ;p) But as stands that helped a bunch.

Just one little thing, on the male, you slid the pixels outward so now his upper thighs kind of bell out instead of looking like 1 mass of legg, so fix those pixels and I'll be done for now XD