The Title Screen for my game.

[asquith]

Excuse me Spade will u make me a title screen for my game
The name is
The Knights of Gale

 

[Venetia]

Please don't post messages requesting things within someone's critique thread when they didn't ask for it. There's a whole section for that.

 

[$t3v0]

No problem. Will be great to see what you come up with

 

[Spades]

Sorry about the long update, this weeks has been busy.
Anyway, I've updated the picture using some of the critique and suggestions that you have given me, and I hope you enjoy it!
I realized I have messed up a little bit on the "S" in making it looks a little too much covered...

 

[NexS]

ok i dont hink you took my comment the way i meant it..... i meat fo you to brighten only the letters within that radius and slowly fade it out the the previous colour(a few letters across) and what you've done is lighten the whole thing and then chuck a lense flare in there...

 

[Samboy]

Holy crap! It looks hot now...

 

[Spades]

@nexs: Brighten only the letter? All i did was just brush a small flash in the background of the letter and changed it's opacity.. I'm sorry :P
@samboy:Thanks!

 

[NexS]

damn... i dont think i'm good at explaing wht i'm talking about.. i'll try and draw a little something up to explain

 

[Spades]

Well, it might have been my predictions on what you meant..
it seemed like the drawing $t3v0 drew for me I had thought wrong or something.

 

[Reives]

New one looks much better than the old ones. :> But just a personal pet peeves - that mapped part with the crystal in the middle really turns me off. D: Especially since it's so minor and bland.

 

[Spades]

Hm.. It does look a little bland. Bah, i was focusing more on the text.. I had overlooked that.. I'll probably fix it when NexS draws what he meant.

 

[NexS]

lol i'm trying to scan... but i'm having issues... i'll it up when i sort it out :D

EDIT: ok here we go.

Spoiler: i hope you can read my writing

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y119/neuxes/Scan10001.jpg[/IMG]

 

[Spades]

Oh, now I get most of it
But I think I did a good part with the lighting source, not the text itself, thanks for that tips though
and I can read your writing :P

 

[Danton Lavergne]

Get rid of that floor whatever thing in the middle.

 

[NexS]

ok man, i'm looking forward to seeing it very soon

 

[Spades]

@Serenade: Well everyone here told me that I need something that to give my title set meaning..

@NexS: Yeah I'll try and work on it as soon as I can.

 

[Venetia]

That's why I was saying to make the tileset pieces animated so they don't have to match the smoothness of the rest of the picture.

It wouldn't be hard to do, just bypass the title screen or use an "animated title" script.

 

[Spades]

I'll try the animated title script ven, hopefully it will work

 

[Spades]

UPDATE:
Updated it to show all I could do for the description NexS has told me.
It SUCKS. I know it, and I will work harder on it when i have more time

 

[NexS]

YES! thats the way! but you should lower the "S" now :P lol and kinda lose the white outlines :D

looking good