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[Styno]

Your grammar is...

its...

I've never seen someone using professional looking pictures with HORRID grammar.

I think the mapping is ok...

WHATS WRONG WITH THE TEENAGERS, WE NEED MOAR OLD.

I realize the 2 worlds thing is overused.

I'm dutch you know, English is my 3rd language so don't flame :p

btw, The main character is a teenager, I don't think he will travel with old folks..
And I know, the first 5 minutes is with a teenager... the rest of the game isn't even made, so hey, there will be more old folks...

I have a teenager , his best friend, and the girlfriend, do you think I can make one of them a adult?
Like a teenager would have an adult as best friend, of even a adult as girlfriend??

And the other characters (Arthur, Harry, Rose are adults so wait a little bit more! :p)

I have grandpa and grandma,aren't they old enough for you? :p

and btw, it's the whole story the two world thing, so overused... yea, I think it should be.
Ever heard of King Kong but without New York Being used???

 

[LiquidMetal91]

Who care's about grammer??

I'm dutch 2 (though I've been raised with English as a second language, and as you probably can see I 2 make mistakes, everyone does - yes, even Americans... ¬¬)

But still... Someone can help him with the mistakes in his spelling... It's not that much of a big deal..

So M8, keep up the good work. The chars look great!!