The pall

[patrico]

Please say iff there is a bug
And please give it a figure/mark or something else ^^

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The strory begin a long time ago.
When there were a great battle whit Good and Evil.
The good one asked the Spirits for help.
And the spirits give them the weapon.
The weapon were calld The Pall.
With the weapon they killd the Evil.
When the battle were end the good ones hidden the Weapon

Story 1
The game takes place on the Island calld:
Carando Island
The monsters are getting crazy
And your job is to calm down the monsters
Before the monsters destroy the local towns.

Download:
http://rapidshare.com/files/151248456/The_Pall.rar.html

 

[Despain]

24 hours to guess what's wrong with this and then fix it. After that, this crap is locked.

 

[patrico]

Screenshots ?

 

[mawk]

Not quite.

 

[patrico]

Story ?
Id made this game in 3 days but I got a idea how to create its story ^^
Srry but im only a noob

 

[JD_Slasha]

Well either post a paragraph of story or this will be locked. Noob or not.