The Legend Of The Dark Star
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Never do maps hastily, NEVER EVER DO THAT!
Believe me or not, the 1st map without the scenes took me about 1 hour.
AND I HATE SQUARE HOUSES!!!
Not ALL houses are square! ( and the structuring is complicated even though its square )
And please ADD LOTS OF SIDE STUFF TO THE MAP!
Enough of map ranting, onto the others
Ok, here is my personal rants: ( dont bother these )
Another saving the world classic theme
End of personal rants.
WHY in so many people would the mayor choose a 18-year old? Lol that in Real-life ( 18 year old general goes to war. Who dosen't even exist. )
and it would be cool if I see some old people fighting with the party.
And I really hate the name "legends", its OVERUSED.
Believe me or not, the 1st map without the scenes took me about 1 hour.
AND I HATE SQUARE HOUSES!!!
Not ALL houses are square! ( and the structuring is complicated even though its square )
And please ADD LOTS OF SIDE STUFF TO THE MAP!
Enough of map ranting, onto the others
Ok, here is my personal rants: ( dont bother these )
Another saving the world classic theme
End of personal rants.
WHY in so many people would the mayor choose a 18-year old? Lol that in Real-life ( 18 year old general goes to war. Who dosen't even exist. )
and it would be cool if I see some old people fighting with the party.
And I really hate the name "legends", its OVERUSED.
RATED-RKOFRANKLIN
Member
Here is the newest map I'm working on. It is the major's house.
You don't seem to be listening to anybody. Your mapping is still empty. From what I can see you are using all RTP tilesets, and that is not normally a good idea. They don't have enough tiles in them to get some proper detail into a map. Somewhere around here is an ultimate RTP tileset, which has all the interior tiles of all the tilesets in it. Try searching for it. Your mapping could probaly improve if you had some more tiles. Even so, I would recommend Tindy's General Mapping Guideline thread, here. That could really help you out.
Lastly, here is your story with the grammer errors corrected. That way, your game will seem a bit more proffesional:
50 years ago in the nation of Neiration, a powerful man began a rebellion against the government. Many people sided with him to take down the government. The nation was in intense chaos. The entire world was shocked of what was happening in this peaceful nation. Turner, the man behind the rebellion, had power like no man had seen before. Neiration's King, Ralph, gave it his best efforts to stop Turner. However, Turner wouldn't be denied, and lead his rebels to victory. The former King Ralph left the country with his family and closest friends. The world now looks at the new nation: The Federation.
Over the next 50 years the world became more industrialized. Many people were highly successful. Nations worked with one another. The Federation often worked with other nations on top profitable projects. They were also known for advancing in technology at a fast rate. These were times of peace.
The world is now in utter chaos. The most advance nation in the world, The Federation, is on a mission to conquer the world. Many nations have fallen to The Federation. Other nations are in great fear because they could be next to fall. The Federation has it eyes set on Gauchet. A powerful nation, but just like every nation it is weak compared to The Federation. A young man, Franklin has been summoned to see the mayor of Herts. The mayor Jones wants Franklin and his nephew Harper to stop The Federation's evasion in Gauchet.
Hope that helps.
Lastly, here is your story with the grammer errors corrected. That way, your game will seem a bit more proffesional:
50 years ago in the nation of Neiration, a powerful man began a rebellion against the government. Many people sided with him to take down the government. The nation was in intense chaos. The entire world was shocked of what was happening in this peaceful nation. Turner, the man behind the rebellion, had power like no man had seen before. Neiration's King, Ralph, gave it his best efforts to stop Turner. However, Turner wouldn't be denied, and lead his rebels to victory. The former King Ralph left the country with his family and closest friends. The world now looks at the new nation: The Federation.
Over the next 50 years the world became more industrialized. Many people were highly successful. Nations worked with one another. The Federation often worked with other nations on top profitable projects. They were also known for advancing in technology at a fast rate. These were times of peace.
The world is now in utter chaos. The most advance nation in the world, The Federation, is on a mission to conquer the world. Many nations have fallen to The Federation. Other nations are in great fear because they could be next to fall. The Federation has it eyes set on Gauchet. A powerful nation, but just like every nation it is weak compared to The Federation. A young man, Franklin has been summoned to see the mayor of Herts. The mayor Jones wants Franklin and his nephew Harper to stop The Federation's evasion in Gauchet.
Hope that helps.
RATED-RKOFRANKLIN
Member
I have been listening to people. Have you even looked at my maps that I've edited?
Thanks for telling me about the ultimate titleset. However where is the wall piece in the title set? It is the piece that forms the wood walls and makes the area behind it black. I think it is called an auto tile
Thanks for telling me about the ultimate titleset. However where is the wall piece in the title set? It is the piece that forms the wood walls and makes the area behind it black. I think it is called an auto tile
I have looked at your edited maps, and they're kind of the ones I ment. They're only just a bit better than the first ones.
Autotiles are seperate images, you just add them in the database. There's a tab called 'Tilesets' where you add them. You should read the RMXP help file. That's a really basic skill. If you don't know that, no offence ment, you probably shouldn't be releasing a game yet. Take a bit of time to check all the features of RMXP, and don't just rush straight in and post your game.
Autotiles are seperate images, you just add them in the database. There's a tab called 'Tilesets' where you add them. You should read the RMXP help file. That's a really basic skill. If you don't know that, no offence ment, you probably shouldn't be releasing a game yet. Take a bit of time to check all the features of RMXP, and don't just rush straight in and post your game.
RATED-RKOFRANKLIN
Member
Yeah I knew where titesets were. I should have learn about the autotitles function. Thanks. I'll be redoing all of my maps now.
RATED-RKOFRANKLIN
Member
I have restarted the project a few days ago. I'm making new maps for the game. I'm not finished with the maps yet and there are a few grammar errors I need to address.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5J_B0n006yU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5J_B0n006yU
-The Story...Ridiculus...
Really, Federation taking over the world
mayor tells two unlikely heroes to stop them
this is a no-no in game making.
Actually put some effort into your game, dont magically get the characters involved.
The mapping isnt great either, your interiors are way too big and outside isnt much better dood. I suggest you go into the mapping improvement thread and get some opinions and advice on mapping.
Really, Federation taking over the world
mayor tells two unlikely heroes to stop them
this is a no-no in game making.
Actually put some effort into your game, dont magically get the characters involved.
The mapping isnt great either, your interiors are way too big and outside isnt much better dood. I suggest you go into the mapping improvement thread and get some opinions and advice on mapping.
Mega Flare
Awesome Bro
a lot of your characters sound the same as your other project