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The Last Sunrise

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Story:

This is a story based on love, the value of friendship and revenge all twisted together for what I have thought to be a good story. This story has always been in my head since I was 12 and over time it adapted and twisted into something beautiful and I wish to show you my story in my 4 part saga please read view the screens and post replies all I need to keep me motivated is comments and helpful criticism.
Robert Webb- Creator

Before The Game

200 years ago hidden in the dense forests of the country Migoto the village of the shadow dragon ninja clan live carrying out contracts given to them by the people of Migoto. During the graduation of the villages kenshuusei a strange character approaches Houka the village leader and demands he marries the eldest daughter the village has to offer. They refuse. The stranger in a blind fit of rage strikes Houka unconscious and swears:
"Every five years I will return to this village and I shall kidnap your eldest daughter".

The village thought nothing of the threat until exactly five years after the stranger made his threat the villages eldest daughter Kusabana Ryoku disappears and a note is left.
In a blinding state of panic and rage Houka quickly assembles a small team of Seiryoku, The best ninja the village has to offer. Tanetetsu ijirashii lead the group. A kind hearted and honest ninja who is also a merciless killer to all that oppose his clan.
The team is sent on their mission 4 nights after the kidnapping and ventured out to seek information. over the course of 5 months they discover the man's location but also his name and his background from a old woman Hannya Kakan from the water dragon village
she warned them not to fight the man not because it is a unfair fight but because she was scared for their lives. Hannya also told them that the man was no man at all but that he was a vampire a evil seed of hate that was hatched in the fiery pits of Hell itself. The creatures name was Makai a well known vampire in Migoto, most known for snatching girls as they come of age in all the great ninja villages. Tenetetsu swore he and the ninja who followed him would avenge all the girls the vampire stole across the land and darted off towards the creatures home.

Upon arrival at Makai's Mansion Tanetetsu is approached by a elderly man who reveals himself as Marcus a magician from the eastern continent. Marcus also reveals his intentions to destroy Makai but instead of calling the vampire Makai he uses the vampires birth name Alucard. After telling Tanetetsu and the Seiryoku that Alucard cannot be killed only sealed within a body and passed down the bloodline of a chosen individual. Marcus believes that he has been chosen by the sealing tome so is granted permission to accompany the Seiryoku into the mansion.

While inside the mansion the group encounters many traps and creatures summoned by the "Dark Arts". Alucard reveals through his own magic that amplifies his voice through his home that before the group are aloud to face him that they must face one final test so they are attacked by a giant half man half wolf creature. During the fight with this creature Marcus is struck down the the wolf and passes the tome to Tanetetsu and tells him that he believes he is also chosen at that moment the other ninja bring down the wolf. Just as Tanetetsu walks towards the horror that awaits them Marcus warns him that if he uses the tome he curses his clan. The curse would be that they must keep the tome within fifty metres of Tanetetsu's body dead or alive or the seal will break. Tanetetsu takes heed of the warning and continues to face Alucard.

The battle with Alucard was a true nightmare the 4 Seiryoku relentlessly attacked Alucard. Trying to protect Tanetetsu while
he re-sited the sealing spell (which was hard due to it being in a foreign language) but was successful after some time and sealed Alucard within the fibres of his body.

Awaking in the confides of his home in his home village Tanetetsu learns the death of three of his comrades which was placed in the tomb of heroes inside the Dragon Forest Just north of the village.
Tanetetsu and the other surviving ninja is granted a early retirement lived long and happy lives and is both now buried in the tomb of heroes.

Present

Seriph is a long serving Seiryoku of the Shadow Dragon Ninja Clan shrouded by a mysterious past begins his day like normal until he finds out his assignment was a fake just to get him out of the village while a group of water bandits hired by a mysterious employer steals the ancient tome hidden within the Tomb of Heroes. Seriph defeats the water bandits leader and rushes back to the village only to realise he is too late.
His home, friends, family and only love are dead. Now is the time to avenge.


Screens:


Features:

Using Mr Mo's ABS System to create a Real-time fighting experience
Highly Detailed Mapping to make The Last Sunrise as beautiful as possible
Slipknots Advanced Messaging System to create better conversations between characters
Completely Non-linear Gameplay!!!!!

Characters:
Name: Seriph Achiho
Age: 22
Sex: Male
Bio: A quite and merciless killer of the Shadow Dragon Ninja Clan. Never failed a mission even walked away from 90% of them unharmed. Quiet and serious everything he says always has meaning. Amyee is deeply in love with Seriph although he does not realise it.
The main protagonist of The Last Sunrise

Name: Alucard
Age: ???
Sex: Male
Bio: Not a lot is known about Alucard other than he is a vampire. There has been speculation on whether he is or is not the first of his kind. The main Antagonist of The Last Sunrise

Name: Amyee Brickes
Age: 21
Sex: Female
Bio: A very energetic and flirtatious ninja from the SDNC. Uses unusual methods in her assassination missions by which she lures the target to her by flirting with them. Has a close mission success to Seriph. Seriph is deeply in love with Amyee although she does not realise it.

Name: Grandmaster
Age: ????
Sex: Male
Bio: The founder and leader of the SDNC a highly acclaimed ninja from around the world now retired and living the rest of his days in the big house just by Shadow Dragon Village.

Credits:
Mr Mo
Cybersam
Near Fantasia
Constance
Hawk-McKain

Requests:

I am looking for anyone who is willing to volunteer their skills to help me. I would really like this game to use as little RTP as possible. if you would like to help just message me asking what i need and ill let you know =]

Characters
Faces
Custom Menu (something like DE:Dissolution but more ninja like =])
Icons
An Original Window Skin
Anyone who can customise Mr MO's Abs HUD

Anyone who helps I will give an epic amount of credit to each one of you
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"Highly Detailed Mapping to make The Last Sunrise as beautiful as possible"
Uhm, no? Sorry if this sounds rude but you're mapping is awfull. Your mapping is way to squary and empty.
 

Nachos

Sponsor

gRaViJa":1ffekpts said:
"Highly Detailed Mapping to make The Last Sunrise as beautiful as possible"
Uhm, no? Sorry if this sounds rude but you're mapping is awfull. Your mapping is way to squary and empty.
Idem, go to the screenshot section of the forum and see how the good mapping is made.
 
I have noticed the little problem and am addressing it ive just been at a lot of rave reasontly so havent had much time but now its calmed down for a week the maps will look better :biggrin:
 

moxie

Sponsor

Definitely check this and this out. One is Tindy's fancy mapping tutorial, and the other is the improvement thread, where you can post one of your screenies and get pointers.

I'm not sure if you're graphically inclined, but the bubbly HUD of that ABS is gonna look really out of place if you're going for a "srs ninja game" atmosphere. If you can't edit it yourself, you might try a thread in Resource Requests. Your logo has some readability issues, too.
 
Yeah your maps have way too much open space and are way too blocky. Don't feel bad. Everyone who has ever opened the program has started there. One thing I noticed is the dirt paths in your town are really nice because the meander to and fro in a rather natural way. You want to apply that same principle to your cliffs and ledges. Also the all of the tiled houses in the rtp aren't meant to be put up as is. Think of them like a palette with which you can shape the houses. It'll all tile together fine if you pay attention. Also close your open map edges. Find ways to have the features of your map funnel the player to where they are supposed to go. This will also make your maps look better as well as function better for your players. Just some thoughts.
 
I'm not a fan of Ninjas and stuff, but I'll still comment.

The high detailed mapping, even if its true, I don't think it should be listed as features.

The maps, the first one is YUCK, there is no fauna, only grass, plain grass, no bushes, no nothing, too empty.

And yeah, the houses look too similiar like what Captain Murphy said.

HOOHAH!

Though about the paths, I recommend cutting off some of the paths to make your town more "rural" in a sense.
 
thanks guys ive relli been working hard on it now and i hope it will meet your satisfaction =] unfortuatly had no time to get screenshots due to i have been doing a lot of gigs with my band but i will get them asap =]
 

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