The Dark Wanderer - opinions please :> ( demo included )

[megatronx]

Hi,

About year ago i did this small demo. Than i had no time to work on the game. But now i thought i could undust it and maybe finish it. That's why I would apreaciate if you could try out the demo, and tell me would it be worth to fully develop this idea?

The Dark Wanderer
Game tells a story of a young boy who one day meets a mysterious being, which warnes him about upcoming danger which hangs above his planet. Boy has to seek the ultimate power which will alow him awake the ancient being which can save his planet from the upcoming dissaster.

Game File:
Exe ( link works )
BGM Files( need to be downloaded to):
Music files part 1
Music files part 2
(sorry for such big download)
screenies:



Thanks

ps. the old exe had wrongly setted up starting possition :/ chaos xD sry

 

[Numb]

Hello megatronx.
You might want to take a look at the Project Discussion Rules. Specifically rules #2, and #3.

 

[megatronx]

":jhz6wj9h]Hello megatronx.
You might want to take a look at the Project Discussion Rules. Specifically rules #2, and #3.

Oh, pardon me. Bacause i'm realy looking forward for people feedback on what has been done up till now, could you move the topic where it could exist as it is please?

Thanks

 

[Numb]

I am not a moderator, megatronx.
Also, the project is in the correct section; however, you must have atleast one paragraph of story.
Fix it, please.

 

[megatronx]

":2s60kjda]I am not a moderator, megatronx.
Also, the project is in the correct section; however, you must have atleast one paragraph of story.
Fix it, please.

it's fixed

 

[Numb]

Awesome.
I wanna download this game, but I don't understand, why is the music separate?

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I downloaded the demo, and the demo is unencrypted. You might want to encrypt the file, so people are unable to steal your graphics, maps, scripts, et cetera.

 

[megatronx]

":utqzdv42]Awesome.
I wanna download this game, but I don't understand, why is the music seperate?

That's because music files are not yet edited mp3. All together they 28 mb, and boxnet alowes free uploads only up to 25mb.

edit:

":utqzdv42]Awesome.
I downloaded the demo, and the demo is unencrypted. You might want to encrypt the file, so people are unable to steal your graphics, maps, scripts, et cetera.

I don't think there is much to be stolen yet. Most of stuff is public. There is not many maps either, so it should,t be a problem.

 

[Numb]

Okay.
Feedback time.

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The game looks pretty good! However, you have many spelling and grammar errors you might want to fix. The graphics are cool; I like the 3D faces, also goodwork with the UMS.
I do think you should continue with this game.

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[megatronx]

":1a3hbns0]Okay.
Feedback time.

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The game looks pretty good! However, you have many spelling and grammar errors you might want to fix. The graphics are cool; I like the 3D faces, also goodwork with the UMS.
I do think you should continue with this game.

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Yeay. Thanks. English is not my first language. I know a couple of english writers, so i'll probubly ask them for help sooner ol later.

 

[megatronx]

No more comments? 8.

 

[Lazer Kirby]

Well, your mapping does look good...
If boxnet only allows 25MB per file, you might want to consider moving to another file uploader. (like Mediafire.com)

 

[megatronx]

Well, your mapping does look good...
If boxnet only allows 25MB per file, you might want to consider moving to another file uploader. (like Mediafire.com)

Thanks. What do you think about the story?

 

[Lazer Kirby]

Well... the story.. er.... is a bit different from many of the others (and it has many spelling mistakes) but it still seems like any old plot for the story. I'm not saying it's bad, and I'm not saying it's good either. It didn't really persuade me to download your demo, though.
EDIT: Now I know English is not your first language after re-reading some of the posts before mine.

 

[Marc1k1]

Well, your mapping does look good...
If boxnet only allows 25MB per file, you might want to consider moving to another file uploader. (like Mediafire.com)

Thanks. What do you think about the story?

I'll give the demo ago later today...
.... ...

Untill then i guess..

.:EDIT:.
Oh yeah! I would suggest using that upload site the other dude mentioned or if you want to use Ifile.com (or .co.uk)

They let you do 100MB files and loads of 'em.

.:EDIT2:.
Damn it! whats wrong with me ¬_¬'.. .. well
If you want to get the spelling spot on I would say go onto Microsoft Word and write the text in there first then when your done copy & paste the correct text to the game boxey.. thingy you know what I mean, But to be hounest you seem like you have a good grasp on the english langauge so it shouldent be that big a problem.

 

[megatronx]

Well, your mapping does look good...
If boxnet only allows 25MB per file, you might want to consider moving to another file uploader. (like Mediafire.com)

Thanks. What do you think about the story?

I'll give the demo ago later today...
.... ...

Untill then i guess..

.:EDIT:.
Oh yeah! I would suggest using that upload site the other dude mentioned or if you want to use Ifile.com (or .co.uk)

They let you do 100MB files and loads of 'em.

.:EDIT2:.
Damn it! whats wrong with me ¬_¬'.. .. well
If you want to get the spelling spot on I would say go onto Microsoft Word and write the text in there first then when your done copy & paste the correct text to the game boxey.. thingy you know what I mean, But to be hounest you seem like you have a good grasp on the english langauge so it shouldent be that big a problem.

Yeah, cool. What do you think overall about the demo so far?

 

[megatronx]

Any more opinions?