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The Chronicles of the Middle School Pokemon
I remember when everything used to be normal. Don’t you remember when we were all just kids in middle school? Now what are we? What am I? Wait just a minute if you don’t know what’s going on, we should go back a bit.
We were all in the middle of a huge assembly when it happened. “Students take your seats please†said Ms.BlackBerry. Everyone in the auditorium sat down. “Now please stand up for the pledge†said Ms.BlackBerry. Robert sighed this was all very tedious to him. “Now everyone say it completely and fully†said Ms.BlackBerry. “I pledge allegiance to my flag and the republic for which it stands: one nation indivisible with liberty and justice for all†Everyone said in unity.
Robert was still standing up looking around in the distance he saw Victor and Erika talking. “I can’t wait to go to the white castle later today†said Victor making a triangle to symbolize a castle. “Who gives a shit about white castle†said Erika his girl friend. Erika was in a bitchy mood as usual. Robert was depressed the more he thought about it she stopped being his friend thanks too Victor the internet thug.
Just as Robert was about to sit down the ground started shaking. “Earth Quake†Jason yelled! Everyone started to panic. People were running around yelling and crying. “What’s going on†Robert asked Keeshawn? “I don’t know†said Keeshawn. Suddenly thousands of cracks appeared in the ground. The floor cracked into pieces and everyone fell in.
That’s how it started but now what’s going on. Where am I falling to? When Robert woke up he was in a grassy plain of some kind laying flat on his back. “Owww I felt like I just got shot with a bullet†Robert said struggling to stand on his feet. “Where am I†He wondered looking around?
On closer expectation he realized that it wasn’t anywhere he had been. “You are in the Bodom region or on closer inspection you’re in Janemba plains†said a weird looking animal. “Who are you†asked Robert? “Well me I am just a Slowpoke wandering this lonely plain. Slowpoke studied him carefully and then said “you look like a Piplupâ€. “Huh what’s a Piplup†asked Robert?
“Ah so you are one of the ones that fell out of the sky†Slowpoke said. “What do you mean, I don’t know what your talking about†said Robert. “Follow me†said the slowpoke. Without even looking to see if he was behind him he was on the move. He went forward for about 70 steps until he stopped into what looked like a mirror in the middle of the grassy floor.
“Look at yourself†said the Slowpoke. Slowly and cautiously Robert approached. He had played enough games to know that when someone told you to look in a mirror it was either to show you something or to take you somewhere. He moved on to the mirror and looked downward. He was in shock at what he saw. He had turned into some kind of blue penguin.
“HOLY CRAP†Robert yelled in shock! “Like I said before you’re a Piplup now follow me maybe you know the other one I found†said Slowpoke. “Hey Slowpoke where are we going, who’s the other one, how many fell from the sky†Robert asked confused by the chain of events? “So many questions and yet so few answers my young friend. I don’t know how many fell out of the sky. We are going to the town of Velvet and he’s unconscious so I don’t know his name. All I know is that he’s a Chimchar†said Slowpoke starting to move again.
TO BE CONTINUED…..
The Chronicles of the Middle School Pokemon
I remember when everything used to be normal. Don’t you remember when we were all just kids in middle school? Now what are we? What am I? Wait just a minute if you don’t know what’s going on, we should go back a bit.
We were all in the middle of a huge assembly when it happened. “Students take your seats please†said Ms.BlackBerry. Everyone in the auditorium sat down. “Now please stand up for the pledge†said Ms.BlackBerry. Robert sighed this was all very tedious to him. “Now everyone say it completely and fully†said Ms.BlackBerry. “I pledge allegiance to my flag and the republic for which it stands: one nation indivisible with liberty and justice for all†Everyone said in unity.
Robert was still standing up looking around in the distance he saw Victor and Erika talking. “I can’t wait to go to the white castle later today†said Victor making a triangle to symbolize a castle. “Who gives a shit about white castle†said Erika his girl friend. Erika was in a bitchy mood as usual. Robert was depressed the more he thought about it she stopped being his friend thanks too Victor the internet thug.
Just as Robert was about to sit down the ground started shaking. “Earth Quake†Jason yelled! Everyone started to panic. People were running around yelling and crying. “What’s going on†Robert asked Keeshawn? “I don’t know†said Keeshawn. Suddenly thousands of cracks appeared in the ground. The floor cracked into pieces and everyone fell in.
That’s how it started but now what’s going on. Where am I falling to? When Robert woke up he was in a grassy plain of some kind laying flat on his back. “Owww I felt like I just got shot with a bullet†Robert said struggling to stand on his feet. “Where am I†He wondered looking around?
On closer expectation he realized that it wasn’t anywhere he had been. “You are in the Bodom region or on closer inspection you’re in Janemba plains†said a weird looking animal. “Who are you†asked Robert? “Well me I am just a Slowpoke wandering this lonely plain. Slowpoke studied him carefully and then said “you look like a Piplupâ€. “Huh what’s a Piplup†asked Robert?
“Ah so you are one of the ones that fell out of the sky†Slowpoke said. “What do you mean, I don’t know what your talking about†said Robert. “Follow me†said the slowpoke. Without even looking to see if he was behind him he was on the move. He went forward for about 70 steps until he stopped into what looked like a mirror in the middle of the grassy floor.
“Look at yourself†said the Slowpoke. Slowly and cautiously Robert approached. He had played enough games to know that when someone told you to look in a mirror it was either to show you something or to take you somewhere. He moved on to the mirror and looked downward. He was in shock at what he saw. He had turned into some kind of blue penguin.
“HOLY CRAP†Robert yelled in shock! “Like I said before you’re a Piplup now follow me maybe you know the other one I found†said Slowpoke. “Hey Slowpoke where are we going, who’s the other one, how many fell from the sky†Robert asked confused by the chain of events? “So many questions and yet so few answers my young friend. I don’t know how many fell out of the sky. We are going to the town of Velvet and he’s unconscious so I don’t know his name. All I know is that he’s a Chimchar†said Slowpoke starting to move again.
TO BE CONTINUED…..
The Chronicles of the Middle School Pokemon Chapter 2
This was all highly unusual. Robert was still really confused as too what was going on. He had somehow turned into a penguin and gone into a completely different world. Could this have something to do with the earth quake he wondered to himself?
“How much longer Slowpoke I’m getting tired†said Robert yawning.
“Just a little bit further†said Slowpoke. After about five more minutes of walking slowpoke suddenly came to a stop.
“What†Robert asked?
“This rock that blocks our path it would seem like it would make a good test for you†said the slowpoke staring at Robert curiously. “Tackle it†said Slowpoke.
“What in the hell do you mean by tackle it why should I†asked Robert getting frustrated?
“JUST DO IT†the slowpoke yelled. It seemed like there was some power behind his words because Robert ran forward with all his might and tackled straight into it. For a moment nothing happened at all but then it shattered into pieces. “Good now we can continue†said the Slowpoke starting to move again. After another 30 minutes they arrived in front of a gate. On the side there was a placemat of some kind where you can put your foot. Slowpoke put his foot there and then the gate opened. They were inside of a colorful village full of flowers and trees. “This…….this is the town of Velvet†said Slowpoke continuing to move.
“Where are we going now†Robert asked the Slowpoke.
“To my house so you can see the Chimchar†said Slowpoke. Now they were in front of a house made out of sticks. Slowpoke took out a key and twisted it in the lock and moved inside. They saw a red monkey moving around. “So your finally awake†Slowpoke asked the monkey. He didn’t respond.
“Who’s this†Robert asked Slowpoke.
Slowpoke just moved out of the way and said “I’m going to go prepare some breakfast for the two of youâ€.
“He says I’m a Chimchar but my name is Jason†said the Chimchar.
“Really are you the Jason I know†Robert asked? One of his best friends was named Jason. He was in his school and was there when the earth quake happened. Was it possible that this was him?
“Do you remember a boy named Robert in your school†Robert asked.
“I don’t remember anything besides my name, I don’t remember a school or a Robert†said Jason.
“Danm†said Robert.
“You should get some rest Piplup†said Slowpoke.
“Why do you keep calling me Piplup my name is Robert†said Robert.
“You sure are hard headed boy aren’t you†said Slowpoke. “Listen this is the world of Pokemon which is basically a bunch of different kind of animals living together in a world of peace†said Slowpoke.
“I’m going to sleep†said Robert.
“You’ve had a hard day you should go to sleep†said Slowpoke. “Chimchar and I are going out for some training†said Slowpoke. For a minute Robert wanted to get up and go with them but once he laid down he blacked out. He was having a dream of some sort. There was a wood gecko and a blue turtle that were looking for him. They came across a white castle and went in. Once they went in they screamed just as when Robert was about to see what they saw he was awoken by a loud crashing noise.
A piece of the wall was falling down on him, he couldn’t do anything was this it? Suddenly a high speed tackle knocked it out of the way. It was Jason standing there with some bruises and scars. Robert looked out of the side of the wall and he could tell it was night outside he also smelled smoke.
“What’s going on†Robert asked Jason with a bit of worry in his voice.
“The village is under attack by Houndour now get moving we need to run†said Jason.
TO BE CONTINUED……
This was all highly unusual. Robert was still really confused as too what was going on. He had somehow turned into a penguin and gone into a completely different world. Could this have something to do with the earth quake he wondered to himself?
“How much longer Slowpoke I’m getting tired†said Robert yawning.
“Just a little bit further†said Slowpoke. After about five more minutes of walking slowpoke suddenly came to a stop.
“What†Robert asked?
“This rock that blocks our path it would seem like it would make a good test for you†said the slowpoke staring at Robert curiously. “Tackle it†said Slowpoke.
“What in the hell do you mean by tackle it why should I†asked Robert getting frustrated?
“JUST DO IT†the slowpoke yelled. It seemed like there was some power behind his words because Robert ran forward with all his might and tackled straight into it. For a moment nothing happened at all but then it shattered into pieces. “Good now we can continue†said the Slowpoke starting to move again. After another 30 minutes they arrived in front of a gate. On the side there was a placemat of some kind where you can put your foot. Slowpoke put his foot there and then the gate opened. They were inside of a colorful village full of flowers and trees. “This…….this is the town of Velvet†said Slowpoke continuing to move.
“Where are we going now†Robert asked the Slowpoke.
“To my house so you can see the Chimchar†said Slowpoke. Now they were in front of a house made out of sticks. Slowpoke took out a key and twisted it in the lock and moved inside. They saw a red monkey moving around. “So your finally awake†Slowpoke asked the monkey. He didn’t respond.
“Who’s this†Robert asked Slowpoke.
Slowpoke just moved out of the way and said “I’m going to go prepare some breakfast for the two of youâ€.
“He says I’m a Chimchar but my name is Jason†said the Chimchar.
“Really are you the Jason I know†Robert asked? One of his best friends was named Jason. He was in his school and was there when the earth quake happened. Was it possible that this was him?
“Do you remember a boy named Robert in your school†Robert asked.
“I don’t remember anything besides my name, I don’t remember a school or a Robert†said Jason.
“Danm†said Robert.
“You should get some rest Piplup†said Slowpoke.
“Why do you keep calling me Piplup my name is Robert†said Robert.
“You sure are hard headed boy aren’t you†said Slowpoke. “Listen this is the world of Pokemon which is basically a bunch of different kind of animals living together in a world of peace†said Slowpoke.
“I’m going to sleep†said Robert.
“You’ve had a hard day you should go to sleep†said Slowpoke. “Chimchar and I are going out for some training†said Slowpoke. For a minute Robert wanted to get up and go with them but once he laid down he blacked out. He was having a dream of some sort. There was a wood gecko and a blue turtle that were looking for him. They came across a white castle and went in. Once they went in they screamed just as when Robert was about to see what they saw he was awoken by a loud crashing noise.
A piece of the wall was falling down on him, he couldn’t do anything was this it? Suddenly a high speed tackle knocked it out of the way. It was Jason standing there with some bruises and scars. Robert looked out of the side of the wall and he could tell it was night outside he also smelled smoke.
“What’s going on†Robert asked Jason with a bit of worry in his voice.
“The village is under attack by Houndour now get moving we need to run†said Jason.
TO BE CONTINUED……