Tertal (WIP)
- Thread starter Clizzz
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Ok, peeps, another update. As stated in the main, this is the second to last update on the Scythe, as seeing that I'm almost done with it. However, be not afraid, for this thread shall return in the form of various other vehicles including a tank (breeze-sized) and other breeze-sized vehicles of warmaking and transportation. Lemme' know whatcha' think!
Yeaahhhh, this is coming along nicely, this one is a lot more attractive and detailed. I'm not loving the hard black, I'd say, shift that up to the next darkest shade.
I assume you haven't placed the reflective shines on anything yet? Because the window'll need it, and also perhaps the vessel itself (although I don't know how smooth/shiny that material should be).
I assume you haven't placed the reflective shines on anything yet? Because the window'll need it, and also perhaps the vessel itself (although I don't know how smooth/shiny that material should be).
@Axerax: Ok, thanks, I'll PM you a little later.
@Venetia: Hell, yes. The ship would look kinda' cheesy without the reflective shine (Especially the Window/Glass), also I changed the wing-swivel to another color , the hard black got annoying after a while.
@Samboy: Well, I'm working on the APC nao, I'll prolly PM you about the tank later.
@Venetia: Hell, yes. The ship would look kinda' cheesy without the reflective shine (Especially the Window/Glass), also I changed the wing-swivel to another color , the hard black got annoying after a while.
@Samboy: Well, I'm working on the APC nao, I'll prolly PM you about the tank later.
Well, it's got the same altered viewpoint that the other ship does. Consistency is good, I guess.
The only problem is that you'll have to design all new tilesets to accomodate them. The shading is OK if you're viewing it from directly overhead, but from any other perspective, it's screwed. Sorry.
The only problem is that you'll have to design all new tilesets to accomodate them. The shading is OK if you're viewing it from directly overhead, but from any other perspective, it's screwed. Sorry.
treads need shading, like where they come out from under the vehicle, also need a highlight where the begind to turn town, to make it look like they arent just flat, also you need to make the segments get narrower as they curve down, and they arent just straight lines across, they link together http://blog.trossenrobotics.com/index.p ... ot-tracks/
*makes a strange "mlawr" noise*
OK, the perspective is way off. Let me draw something for you...
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/6889 ... gp2ne1.png[/img]
Please excuse this disgusting drawing. It seems to be missing the front part of the tracks, as indicated. I'm not great with perspective, but I hope this helps. I think the outlines are too thick, as 3 pixels, or even 2 pixels is too much. Stick to just 1 pixel width.
OK, the perspective is way off. Let me draw something for you...
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/6889 ... gp2ne1.png[/img]
Please excuse this disgusting drawing. It seems to be missing the front part of the tracks, as indicated. I'm not great with perspective, but I hope this helps. I think the outlines are too thick, as 3 pixels, or even 2 pixels is too much. Stick to just 1 pixel width.
Heh, Thanks, Nyphx. Glad you like it. Sorry bout the Tertal, I was doing some house cleaning on my Imageshack account (Preparing to flood it with Breeze Revolution stuff) and I accidentally deleted V1 of the Tertal.
But not to worry, V2 of the Tertal is up now, so let the critiquing commence!
Also, thanks to Sammy for that tank design above. It's pure win, and I've decided to use it! I'll post it later!
But not to worry, V2 of the Tertal is up now, so let the critiquing commence!
Also, thanks to Sammy for that tank design above. It's pure win, and I've decided to use it! I'll post it later!