Template WIP

[Cypher]

This is just a quick template i knocked up the other day, its unfinished, and this aint the full version. Its based off the style of Mikaboshi in Darksydaz' signature. When I saw his signature, I was inspiried to try my hand at a template. Credit goes to Darksydaz for the original character design. C & C are encouraged! :D

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[RavenTDA]

That clothed sprite there looks like something from Darksydaz's game. :\ Did you ask permission to use his design? Be sure to ask and credit him please.

As for the template it looks like the white of the eye is more big bushy white eyebrows. Try defining more of an outline for it. Because right now it just looks like the face on them is really worried.

There are other things that can be worked on but I'm unwilling to help fruther until you credit and ask for permission. Lots of people are particular about their artwork, even if it's design, you know. :\

 

[crazymew]

it does look exactly like mikaboshi... but it's still pretty good

 

[Cypher]

Yeah it is from Darksydaz's sig, the lil' animated floatin guy, I edited the original post to credit him, and I'm about to pm him for permission.

 

[High Mage Vivi]

I like the style of that thing...:D

 

[Darksydaz]

Wow... well i'm impressed... i like it though... it's creative... different from what i would've done... but that's why i like it... The likeness of it is quite unique... But i have 2 Questions...

1.) where is the rest of the template...?

2.) are you interested in working for a team...?

But, by all means... use it... i have no issue with it... just as long as i'm credited for the original...

 

[Cypher]

Hey, thanks for the comments. Im workin hard on this when I can.

@Darksydaz:

1) Its still WIP, I have all the standing frames done, and I'm starting the 'step' frames. Should be complete soon enough.
2) I would love to work for a team, but I won't be able to really get into gear until about june 25th (I have my final school exams for most of june) so Im lacking a lot of spare time lately. But anything I can help with I will do happily, as long as you are willing to wait until june!
Oh, I should have an updated version of the template up by wednesday, may 16th. if anyone is interested.

 

[ccoa]

Get rid on the lines across the joints - it makes him look like he's pieced together. The v-shape below the neck also looks odd, like his collarbone is sunken or something.

 

[Loofah]

He kinda looks like a zombie:D

or someone who hasn't eaten for a week,.