template help

[joakkar]

Hi, it's been long since I uploaded anything here. I just ripped/created a battle template (only first frame) but I'm not able to successfully shade the eyes. Can anyone help?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/joakkar/temp.png[/img]

ps: Ignore the lack of shading in head. I don't have any bald characters xD

 

[ellenor]

Is this ok?
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/3751/likethisoh3.png[/img]
By ellenor
^^
hope it helps you

 

[joakkar]

Thanks  :thumb:. It looks good, but it's kinda like he's crying or something. The colours actually help a lot so I'll edit it a little to look more normal. I could figure out a way to use those eyes as an attack or something xD.

edit: Maybe something like this is ok

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/joakkar/temp-2.png[/img]

 

[bojjenclon]

Thats nice, you should continue this

 

[Macro]

I realize that I am nowhere near a spriting expert but the skin over his ear looks strange. It looks a lot like a flap of skin.