Swimmer and Diver

[ToriVerly]

I made these for my swimming script. Opinions?
Templates
UPDATED
Diving Template: Edited from Mack's male
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j92/c ... dive-1.png[/img]
It only needs 4 frames because it is only visible for a second.
Swimming Template: Again from Mack's male
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j92/c ... e_swim.png[/img]

 

[Jason]

Hey, these are pretty good, I might use them for templates for my game. Nice work

 

[ToriVerly]

You're gonna use my script too right? XD
lol its still buggy anyway....
Oh and thanks for the appraisal of my template!
You don't think the up and down swimming animations look a little weird when they're imported? I'm thinking I should change it to 2 frames (repeated 1, 2, 1, 2) instead of 1, 2, 3, 2. The down animation actually looks like 1, 3, 2, 3...what do you think?

 

[Jason]

I think it looks fine, And I'm thinking of using your script when you fix some of the bugs, hehe.

 

[$t3v0]

the diver facing us is very odd. The side views show the character looking downwards, which is right ... as that's what divers do :P But then the frontal view shows him looking straight at me. He'd have a bit of a shock when he hits the water he won't have a clue when it would be.

~ $t3v0

 

[uzumakishade]

this looks great, i was actually thinking of using a diving sprite for a certain part of my game where your forced to jump a cliff, and now i can do it thanks to your swimming script

 

[ToriVerly]

@$t3v0---Yes...I had a lot of trouble with that...I ended up thinking it'd be okay if he's an idiot and wants to belly flop lmho. Do you think the down dive (facing us as you put it) should be just like the up dive but upsidedown?
@uzumakishade---XDXDI'm glad you like

 

[Axerax]

Actually I could adjust that quite easily, simply take the back head, and flip it horizontally, presto you have the dive head, pretty much how I'd do it, atleast them she/he would be facing down.

 

[ToriVerly]

Oh I thought you guys meant less face not no face lol....I actually kinda like him looking up (now that I'm used to it). The end user can always flip it themselves.

 

[Stupid Penguin]

Looks good but the front facing diver does look odd.
Maybe if his head were a bit lower on his body?
Kinda makes me think he's got a long neck or something.

 

[Tassadar]

yeah, his face doesn't look right... Maybe change it so you only see his eyes and hair, you'd have to bend your neck quite a bit to look that way.

 

[ToriVerly]

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j92/c ... _front.png[/IMG]
Better? Worse?

 

[Tassadar]

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j92/chastity_belted/dive_front.png[/IMG]
Better? Worse?

Well, the first one looks a bit weird still, but it's better than the one you had before. The 2nd on the other hand, looks very good, but you might want to put that head a little bit closer to his body.

 

[ToriVerly]

lol I had a feeling i'd get that mix of the two.
How about this:
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j92/c ... ront-1.png[/IMG]
I think I like the one on the right.
Do you think it looks okay for the facing up dive as well?

 

[Axerax]

The last two look better than the first.

 

[ToriVerly]

Updated my template and my first post. Any other sugestions guys?

 

[Tassadar]

That one looks beautiful, great work!

 

[Axerax]

You should make a sprinting(Sprinting is the correct term for dashing in water) and a diving (For sneak) template, I think that would be cool.