started drawing again...again

[Gulch666]

back to the drawing board on my characters for my game, decided i wanted to redo my main character. here's concept #1

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[Admiral David]

sweet character bro, i really like the character design especially the vest/jacket and the javelin. wish i could give u some useful critique but i just wanna see it colourd! whats the name of ur game?

 

[Gulch666]

thanks for the comments. the game is called will of the lost.

theres some things wrong with it anatomically, right shoulder, right arm, but it was a quick draw, just early concept stage, and the hair is going to change, i dont like it

 

[Gulch666]

anything from you kids? design ideas, critiques on what i have so far?

 

[ErlanUltima]

Great design.
I don't like the Hairstyle too.....
I see this really2 early concept everything you say true.... The right shoulder and the right arm is a little bit strange to me....
I like this! I'am drawing a lot of manga this years but it's all for my game
If this only an early concept how about it when it's done I can't wait! I want toooooooOooo see it this can be a lesson to me! :thumb:

he3 you say kids yeah? Maybe you mean me because I'am 13 Lol!

 

[Ellie]

I like it; the anatomy looks somewhat normal. Only thing I'd say is there's something not quite right about the sideburns. I dunno, the shape is a bit off or something and it looks stuck on.

 

[NexS]

it's pretty... reminds me of beauty and the beast a little

but that's not a bad thing.. Disney is DA BOMB!!!!
don't you dare deny it's awesomeness

 

[Gulch666]

i wont deny that disney in its 2d glory days was awesome, but im getting pretty sick and tired of them mostly giving up on 2d and focusing on tween sitcoms and dumping their money into dreamworks

 

[NexS]

here here!