SRPG

[Banditti]

Genre: Adventure/Parody
Warning - strong language

SRPG: School RPG, Super RPG, Slick RPG, Sad RPG, it's all covered by the epic adventures of Ralph on his journey to school.

Story

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Our hero, Ralph, is starting his hero training at a new school. Like all heroes, Ralph has a little trouble controlling his temper. This puts him in all kinds of trouble along the way! But there is more to this than meets the eye. The sinister school chef is up to something sneaky, and it's up to our hero Ralph, with help from his right-hand man Davis, and his love interest Rachel, to save the day!!!

Screenshots

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But it's hard to capture the essence of a parody story-driven game in screenshots. Click here for the bit you've all been waiting for, THE DEMO!!

Demo
http://www.mediafire.com/?gyjzwtzo2od


Thank you for your interest in SRPG!!!!!!!!

 

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" F U ! I WILL KILL YOU WHEN I'M DONE WITH MY TRAINING"

--That is an example of bad dialogue.

 

[Flickayy]

Why is there so much swearing in your dialogues? its not nessecery.

 

[gRaViJa]

True. For some weird reason parody games always have swearing and cursing in their dialogues.

 

[moog]

This is stupid.

At least try to make it sophisticated? Parody games are only done well if executed properly. Your mapping is shallow and the screens dont tell much except LOL RANDOM SPURTS of profanity.

So, to quote your game:

 

[dadevvtsvre]

Yeah, I can't see much reason for anybody to play this game. There have been tons of "parody" games out there just like this with LOL RANDOM jokes tossed in for a weak attempt at comedy. The best comedy in games (which is surprisingly hard to pull off sometimes) usually involves an element of absurdity, combined with a light-hearted atmosphere and funny characters. Random usage of swear words isn't funny.

If you want to pull players in and get them to play your game, you have to bring something new to the table, and the classic "lol i'm making fun of rpg maker" parody is getting old.

Also, there's nothign wrong with swearing in games, as long as it's not cussing for the sake of cussing.

I can potentially see this becoming a decent game, if you rework your plot, get some intriguing characters, and toss in some fun gameplay.

 

[Banditti]

Ok thanks for the constructive criticism.