Spiritual Oblivion.

[brainstorm]

Oblivion V 1.02


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supirichuaru boukyaku

Spiritual Oblivion:
Yukiri's Fall

Characters:

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Yukiri AKA "Yuki" (Snow or Lucky)-Japanese
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Jazmin AKA "Jay Jay (Jasmine flower, gift from God)-Persian
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Angel AKA "One winged evil..." (Angelic)-Greek


Story:

Gaia a world that used to be A World of Bravery and Strength. Now it is a world of Fear and Weakness. Earthquakes, Volcanoes, Floods, Bugs. And now Them. Monsters called Chaos Viens inhabit and infest the world known as Gaia. The Villages are overpolluted thanks to the back-to-back destruction. Welcome to Gaia.

For sixteen long years a girl and the whole world lived in total Chaos. Yukiri a young girl from the village of Spira, Is on a mission to save Gaia's mana and saving Gaia from her.

View Massive Missions and Sythesize Massive amounts of Items. Complete the Game and Unlock different Villages to unlock Alternate Boss's and Tournaments.

Objective:

Guide Yukiri, Jazmin, and Angel through Gaia to seal Eight Temples of Mana and restore balance to Gaia.

Screenshots.

Spoiler: Screenshots

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tough luck. First battle and it's a boss. Don't worry 3 hit KO. Just don't get burned *evil laugh.*
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First glance at the Overworld. There are more Villages. You just need the maps to unlock them.
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Aikou Village.
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Enter?
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Funny aye? Jay-Jay just told off a pervert.
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Temple of Lightning.
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Example of my mapping skillits

Open to Any Suggestions. Hopin' on a change of title and story and game add-ons.





Demo:
http://rapidshare.de/files/26163034/Oblivion.zip.html
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=D0YOWZEO

 

[Zanifer]

Looks good, though it could use some work, for example screen 56, why are their two man made flower pots randomly in the midst of a field, not even by vegitation or long wild grass, but instead all wild plant life must be contained in human maintained jars? Why i ask because it doesnt make sense. I could brign this point up on most of the maps i see there. Dont use something because its available to you but rather because it will serve a prupose.

 

[brainstorm]

I guess I forgot to put it up there... Um... Those are just Drafts.. I was hoping on putting way more NPCs and Cleaning up inside the maps.... I think I know the contents of a good game, so this may be easy. btw. Do you know how to create cutscenes?

 

[Prexus]

By posting this, was your intent to advertise or to seek help? Just out of curiousity. I wouldn't want you feeling uncomfortable with my reply.

 

[LegACy]

For sixteen long years a girl and the whole world lived in total Chaos. Yukiri a young girl from the village of Spira, Is on a mission to save Gaia's mana and saving Gaia from her.

just wondering, why does she's on a mission to save Gaia? why must she do it instead of just living a normal life?

 

[brainstorm]

to legacy:

Open to Any Suggestions. Hopin' on a change of title and story and game add-ons.

^_^ hehe.. I don't have an answer to that..

to Prexus: yes and I wanted to see if my Idea was good. If you guys won't help I could do it myself...

 

[Zoom]

The world map makes me think of a good title: "Terror of Tiny Towns". Or if you consider those poor girls, "Quest for Food". j/k

Anyway, assuming the mapping will improve over time, looks like a decent project.

 

[brainstorm]

Such a mean comment lol... Tiny Towns aye? Have you ever played TOS(Tales of Symphonia)? lol. The places in the Overworld in that game are tiny. About as big as the Character... ^_^.

Quest for Food? *cries* Those girls aren't as skinny as thhey look...

 

[sandgolem]

Lightning Elemental (Purple)
Death Elemental (Black with sythe and hood)
Aura Elemental (Creamish Yellow)

Have you checked Tana's site? I think she did some similar to what you're looking for

 

[brainstorm]

Sandgolem Thanks alot...

 

[Despain v.1]

It looks like a cool start- you have a great amount of original resources. Thought they may not be the highest quality around, they do look good, and they are original, so I definitely applaud you for that.

The faces look a bit flat- maybe because of the circular shape of the head. But overall this seems promising.

 

[brainstorm]

^_^ Thanks for the good comment.... Comments like those help me finish things....

 

[Big Billy]

Like any new project this one looks like it needs alot of work. BUT... don't take that as a insult. I read the entire post so it can't be that bad. The overall idea of the project is a good one, but one that will take alot of work to come to life. My only suggestion is to keep at it. Also as you go for a walk or outside (in real life) have a look at your surroundings and then use this when making your maps. It helps alot and the fresh air is good for you. lol.

Anyway. Good luck and keep at it.

 

[brainstorm]

I wanted it to be a Kingdom Hearts like game...I got one Tournament Set up so Far... It will be hard.... That Tournament Event took me Hours. Thinking about what might look good. Trying to make a window script do it but failing.... *sigh* I'll take your advice and Keep at it... The First Temple is Set up too... The Thunder Temple. I want to add a twist to getting to the boss like in Tales of Symphonia. and Things like that... I'll be working on that today... and the next Temple Tomorrow.

 

[brainstorm]

Alright you guys.... A demo is now included

 

[The Cry of Fallen Angels]

I'll be sparing you the occasional comments considering the story and mapping, I trust you will get enough of that. This post is to tell you I appreciate the originality.

 

[brainstorm]

It gets better in the demo.... but I think I overdid it in Aikou... so far it''s like 5 minutes of Gameplay... *sigh*

 

[Tim.]

Looks good... downloading the demo after I eat breakfast. But, why is there spray paint on the side of a building in a small village? Just wondering.

 

[brainstorm]

Got bored.... I'm..Ackward....



What I was planning was for sealing the temples is only half the story.... Demo stops at Auron City by the Way.... I'm getting stuff up for the Earth/Fire Temple. There's a special suprise there...

I'm gonna lower the power of skills and Weapons. and set up some recipes for the Synthesis on Friday....