Spirit of Ice

[xxdarkwolfrosexx]

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m259 ... /title.jpg[/IMG]


~THE STORY~
Rei, a very sick and weak Ice demon has just got news from a mysterious man that her father has been murdered. He had gone looking for a way to save his daughter and hunted down an old legend...the legend of the wish granter. According to the legend, 1,000 years ago a powerful mage used her powers to stop a war and gave a wish to the one who fought the hardest beside her. Now she promises a wish in return for the ten elements.
Alexander had gone to the wish granter in hopes of saving his daughter but somehow died. Did the wish granter lie and kill him? And who was the odd man that gave her this news?
Before Rei had time to answer any questions something sends her a new power giving her the ability to walk in return she has to find a man named 'Arrow' and he will tell her about her parents.



~Characters~
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m259 ... reipic.jpg[/IMG] Name: Rei Hino Age: 16
Rei was very sick until a odd power healed her. Now she is on a quest to find what happened to her father and help some man named 'Arrow.' She falls inlove easy but remains loyal to those she loves. She is also very stubborn.


http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m259 ... ackpic.jpg[/IMG] Name: Zack Hino age:24
Zack is Rei's big brother and the main one to take care of her all of her life, they are very close. He helps as best as he can on his sisters quest but doesn't like the idea of finding Arrow. Zack is a true flirt, but also down-to-Earth and loyal. He would do anything for Rei.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m259 ... entpic.jpg[/IMG] Name: Vincent age:19
Vincent is saved by Rei in an attack on his hometown, so he swears loyalty to her and helps her whenever he can. According to Zack, he may love Rei. He is quiet and stubborn, he doesn't really like anybody but Rei.

Spoiler

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m259/xxaxelraynexx/arrowpic.jpg[/IMG]Name:Arrow Age:???
Arrow is a Darkness demon who was sent to Earth to protect Rei but got captured by the person who killed Rei's father. He was the one who healed Rei. Despite the fact she is much younger then him he usually looks to her as a big sister.

~SCREENIES~
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m259 ... eenie2.jpg[/IMG] Zack tells us alittle more about Rei.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m259 ... eenie3.jpg[/IMG] A weird dream about Dad and some guy.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m259 ... reenie.jpg[/IMG] Strolling around town without a care in the world.



~FEATURES~
*Very indepth marraige system
*Music from different bands
*Detailed scenes
*Theiving system
*Tons of partners you can have

 

[Prexus]

Your window skin needs a total revamp. Also your Vincent character is remarkably similar to Vincent Valentine from Final Fantasy 7.

 

[xxdarkwolfrosexx]

What would you suggest for my window screen? Truth be told I really don't like it ether ^^

 

[Prexus]

Uh.. Anything, other than that. Check the download manager, I believe Tana had some good ones up there.

 

[verballydecapitating]

And Rei does not sound/look 16 xD

 

[Ice_Puppet]

Rei Hino, way to steal a completely original character name from Sailor Moon. Haha.

 

[xxdarkwolfrosexx]

I am 16 and she is made to act like me. How does the GAME look?

 

[Zeos]

To be honest this sounds like a very good game, but maybe you could go find resources in the http://www.rmxp.org/forums/showthread.php?t=1839
By the way I like your character's names!

 

[Skyla Doragono]

Your window skin needs a total revamp. Also your Vincent character is remarkably similar to Vincent Valentine from Final Fantasy 7.

That's because the art he used (without credit) is a fan art of Vincent.

Anyway, it MIGHT have promise, but I suggest coming up with different names for characters, making your maps a lot less open -- less needless walking space -- and steering away from the Final Fantasy images as well as the artwork by other people.

And for the love of god, get a new window skin. X_x;

 

[Grey_hok]

You need to fill in the big gaps in your mapping, it'll make it look much better.
Take a look at this:

http://www.rmxp.org/forums/showthread.php?t=6197

 

[xxdarkwolfrosexx]

I'm a she ^^# Stop saying he, minor detail but still i tought i'd point it out :D

 

[liltrell1217]

being a good mapper myself i av to point out that u should fix ur walls at the bottom of ur last screenshot.