Spinel's Core - Main Theme

[Vincent R Quaser]

I wrote the theme for a game entitled 'Spinel's Core' being led by Regimos.
Knowing what you all think of it would be nice. It's in MIDI format just so you know.
http://www.mediafire.com/?0hjmng40nrm

Anywho, not that anyone'll steal it most likely, but since I was asked to write this for an original game, it's not for free.
I exported in MIDI format since personally, I like MIDI infinitely better than my current program's playback. But, that's me. Constructive criticism is preferred.

Arcanum - I merged your old topic with this one, just for organization's sake.

 

[Reives]

You got some good idea going there. :smile: I especially like the end.

I suppose that my main criticism would be that it doesn't seem that catchy as far as melody goes, and that sometimes the notes kind of feel like they are just flying randomly. But none the less, there's certainly a mood that's being expressed, so kudos on that.

 

[Vincent R Quaser]

Thanks. I usually play around with a piano until I find something I like and go from there. That probably accounts for the random notes floating around in there.

I enjoy criticism (to an extent), so long as it's saying exactly what's wrong. So thanks for that.

 

[rikuken]

The beggining just doesn't sound right.

 

[Vincent R Quaser]

Can you say anything further than that? Please? Since if you told me what, I could fix it.