Loads of grammatical errors on the title (ie. 'Where already sending' was put instead of 'were already sending' spelling mistakes like 'nucking' where it should be nuking).
It's a bad point to see such a great idea becoming a little off with including elves and goblins. That kind of put me off, but for the sake of it I carried on playing.
Upon the first scene, I realized that there is not any 'were', you have mistakenly spelled them all 'where'. Punctuation
would have been good. Another downside of the non-game play - the tilesets are really bland.
Okay, going into game play. That battle system is good. I like how it works. Is it Gubi-D's version or another? Also, I would like to point out the fact that the game is riddled with bugs.
Anyway, apart from that it was a pretty enjoyable game.
Please get someone to review everything you write and make sure it's grammatically correct, and fix up the punctuation mistakes.
EDIT: Where are your credits? I instantly recognized one of the songs in the game as "Covert Operations" from
www.FreePlayMusic.com, but I don't see any credits in your post.
EDIT2: Also, there are too many savepoints early in the game and not enough later.