Soulwake: SOTS - voice sample for hellfire spell

[Admiral David]

i'm considering recording my voice for magic spells, expression, and certain cutscenes of my game Soulwake: SOTS, but before i even try to do that would it even be worth the time? basically i'm asking does my voice acting sound crappy or better yet on a scale 1-10 how is it? be honest!

http://www.toofiles.com/en/oip/audios/ogg/hellfire.html

(i know the mic is somewhat scratchy but i got a better 1)

 

[Jason]

To be honest, with the echo effect or whatever you've done to it, it sounds pretty decent, although I think you need to broaden your voice a little and refine it more, since it seems like some teenager is stood in the school hall saying "Hellfire" and listening to it echo.

Now, I'm not sure who is meant to say it in your game, a small child, teenager etc. etc. but I think you should retry it but say it a little faster, not too much, a little louder would be nice too, but you also have to put more feeling into it, as if you were actually there shouting the name as you're doing the animation.

Not sure if that made sense, I'm tired and I tried to write it the best I can.

But from a scale of 1-10, I'd definitely give that a 7

 

[Admiral David]

lol ya it does.. i swear my voice isnt that high tho, i actually pitched it up like a note or 2 in fl studio. but thanks 7 isnt too bad, ya i might have another swing at it tomorrow then

 

[Shizu]

The voice sounds that of a pretty confident teen casting a magical spell (Usually spell casts involve some kind of mild grunting/yell/chant but this one sounds more on the laid back side) . I think if the echo didn't disrupt the pronunciation and added with a bit more enthusiasm it would be a 7-ish too in my book.