Sorceress Battler

[lnicol1990]

I've created a battler by using another as a template. Feel free to say what is good and what needs some work. And whatever needs work, could you please explain.

Thanks!

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[Shifter]

That's cute, I like it.  Not much to critique on it for my since I am not very experienced with making battlers..but I like it :P

 

[Halestorm5]

I would say this battler is perfect/great except for the ultra-thick outline and semi-circle right hand, only problemmo is the face. It just doesnt look realistic... Well, actually it does, but the mouth messes it up :-X

EDIT: And the nose messes it up come to think of it. :cool:

 

[lnicol1990]

Thanks for the critique!

I'll admit I was unsure about the face, but the left hand (thinking mirror images) and the outline? I didn't notice them. Thanks for pointing those out.

I'll post and edited version when I can.

Thanks again.

EDIT:

Here's my third attempt. The one above was actually my second attempt.

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I'm pretty sure that hand's not right. What do you guys think?

 

[Dawne]

Looks pretty good, the mouth is still a little off, and the neckline of her cloak thing
shouldn't go straight across her face though.

Also, the shoulder pad type thing should stick up a bit from her cloak on the left side.


EDIT: Oh, and she looks a little boxy, try to give her some curves (boobs, hip, etc.)

 

[lnicol1990]

Thanks for the advice Dawne.

Here's what I got from from it.

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Is this better?

 

[chaos_mugen]

That one looks a LOT better!