Sonya Blaze - Stylish Cyborg

[Sparx-1]

Here's a pic of one of my characters on the MMORPG, City of Heroes, Sonya Blaze. She's a cyborg with the ability to control fire.

Yes, I know her proportions look weird. It's because of her artifical body, which she tries to cover up with clothes that don't show any skin (And she still looks stylish! ^^).

BTW, The japanese text should read "Sonya Bureizu", which is the japanese pronunciation of her name. If someone who knows how to write Japanese notices there's an error, please tell me! :sweat:

Drawn entirely in pencil, lines darkened in photoshop.

Comments Please!

(BTW If you want to see a few more pics of her and a bio, Check out her page on VirtueVerse.com!^^))

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[Ratty524]

Is her lower torso seriously that thin? That and the wide hips it looks really weird, and even if you were going for a skinny, cartoony design that still just looks wrong.

Other than that, it definitely isn't too bad of a start, but the hip thing is just killing it right now.

 

[Luminier]

Camel toe! Er, I agree with Ratty on the issue of the hips/torso. There's thin torso/wide hips, and then there's... nyah. I'm sorry, but it does come off as a bit creepy.

Also, hello random Japanese characters for no apparent reason. How are you today?(and yes, I do realize that they aren't actually random)

Normally, I don't think squiggles would work out well as hair, but here, it seems to looks good. I have no idea why. :\

Oh, and nice job on the coat!  :thumb:

 

[Danny]

It's a nice design, and you definetely know how to handle your lines, but like mentioned, even for a stylized look (unless this was the extreme you were going for) baby got to much side. Also take the time to look at other artists who have a similar style to this, specifically for the hair, there are more effective way's to create curls that could stay consistent with your style. A good point to your image however is that you have managed to get the perspective fairly right. Keep at it!

 

[Cruelty]

how many people do you know that ball their fist with their thumb OVER their knuckle/s?

 

[Despain]

Her wierd hips make a lot more sense when you look at the skeleton picture. I mean, it's still wierd, but a little more logical.

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