some faces

[Lune de la Cruor]

I'm working on some character art for my game and here are some faces of 3 for the main characters.
Please c&c^^
I know I'm not good with eyes and noses >_> ...but I'd love some feedback

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[Lune de la Cruor]

Ok I've been trying to improve the eyes and noses on another face but it stil looks wierd somwhow.
I think it goes together better now but the noses are so complicated D:
Gonna try to redo the other ones now.

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[Toams]

thats much, much better than the previous eyes. especially the right pair.
try to desaturate the colors on the eyes on the left one a bit.
(btw it's more normal for people with dark/black hair to have brown eyes and blondes with blue eyes..)

 

[Lune de la Cruor]

Thanks for the advise =)
But I chose the blond hair- brown eyes dark hair-blue eyes combinations on purpose!

Spoiler: if you compare these its like 2 different personalities

I just didn't want to have this blond blue eyed girl, who resembles the perfect beauty image, among my characters =p
Brown eyes give more warmth imo.

 

[Admiral David]

your updated versions are hella better, only thing that caught my eye out of place maybe was the nose extends out more than expected on the left face(or maybe you want her like that?) and also on that same face the strands of hair dangling from the top, it seems like the pixels are too sharp but even so they look great, especially the right one

 

[Lune de la Cruor]

Thank you, err yea the nose...that's really something I have to practice now, so for the time being it will probably stay like that and I hope that when I improved I can redo them again and fix it. I'm just happy with the way it looks right now, because thats the best I can do at the moment.
I did correct the hair though, so thanks for pointing this out too =)

Right now I am trying to decide whether I want this face t have a beard or not. I wanted him to look a bit more grown up, so I thought the beard would maybe help with that, but it looks a bit silly :O

What do you guys think?

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[dadevvtsvre]

Those lips look way too feminine. Make them thinner and make them contrast less with the skin-right now they look like they belong on a woman.

 

[Gulch666]

if you want to give him some stubble, at least look at some reference for the shape of facial hair. in your drawing it just goes straight across his face like a bandana of patchy bum hair, its very splotchy and as is just looks plain bad. it might be a lot easier and look better to just make a correct looking shape and use a stubble like texture colored to match his hair color, or if you want him to have a full beard, do it in the same way you did his hair.

goggle image search...beard, get some reference and work from there

 

[Lune de la Cruor]

Thanks for the input =)

Here is an overworked version, the lips blend better now, so thanks for that^^

 

[Gulch666]

much better, but still a bit patchy looking, although a lot of people grow patchy facial hair. but its a big improvement in the right direction